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Sweetie Belle has developed feelings for her fellow Cutie Mark Crusader, Scootaloo. What will she do?? Little does she know, that her friend has developed the same feelings towards her.
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A good start, but you probably should edit the description.
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Thanks, didn't notice that but has now been changed
I will be working on the 2nd chapter sometime this week and will hopefully have it up by the weekend. If it's a little late then i'm sorry
I will try and get the 2nd part to this chapter up, ASAP
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Who would've thought Sweetie Belle is a metrosexual.
7453920 I changed it after I got told. I didn't notice till then
Just a quick question, what is the time period?
7482946 I'm not too sure myself. Sorry that didn't help
Aww, cute fanfic so far, though kinda wonder who it is that wouldn't be happy about it.
Why is this on hiatus?
7540837 That will all become clear in the next chapter
7541060 I have other projects going on as well as this one so it is on hiatus because I have no set schedule to update the story. I update it when I have any free time to do do
I'm loving the story so far
I've been searching for a good ScootaBelle story that wasn't done or abandoned and now I finally found it
I can't wait to see who won't be happy about Scoots and Sweetie being together. I do have some guesses but I wont post them in case I am right and it ends up being a spoiler
Keep up the amazing work! I am looking forward to seeing more of this story
7577906 Thanks! Glad your enjoying it! I plan to get the next chapter out by this weekend!
Error:
Sweetie Belle looked at Scootaloo, tearing up. "I... I... I l-love you!" She THE moved away from Scootaloo and cried
Correction:
Sweetie Belle looked at Scootaloo, tearing up. "I... I... I l-love you!" She THEN moved away from Scootaloo and cried
:)
7580506 Thanks for that! Corrected!
*awkwardness meter explodes* Darn it Lora, I told you not to make any more of those!
Anyway, good chapter.
7627539 Thanks
7627540 You're welcome, I'm enjoying this fanfic so far
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7627558 Great to hear
7627606 Yep, ScootaBelle is cute.
7627620 Out of the CMC ships, Scootabelle is my fav
"Anyway, the story is progressing and now you all know who wouldn't be happy about Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom." You might want to change that
Anyways, this was a pretty good chapter. I personally didn't like Button in this, but hey, somepony has to make that delicious conflict 
This story continues to be very enjoyable, and I look forward to more chapters in the future
EDIT:
Error:
She glared at him. "Scootloo is my fillyfriend." She said firmly
Fix:
She glared at him. "Scootaloo is my fillyfriend." She said firmly
7634085 Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Also, thanks for pointing those errors out. They have been corrected
I'll be working on the new chapter this weekend! College has been getting in the way so I haven't had time to update anything... Sorry for the long wait...
Nice chapter, was good to see Apple Bloom accepting them, and not unrealistic for those three, I hope to see more soon.
7719969 Glad you're still enjoying it. I'll try and be a lot quicker on getting the next chapter done
7719987 Well, just as long as its not super rushed, but I still look forward to it.
Honestly I think I'm fully in the ScootaBelle camp now.
7719996 This one took so long for a couple of reasons:
1. College work was getting the way
2. I did have a writer's block for this story for a few days prior to me writing this chapter.
3, I'm working on other stories too which also caused a delay
I'm happy that you're in the Scootabelle camp! Good to have ya there!
7720013 Fair enough, I know how that is.
Yeah, they are really cute together and everything... now I just have to figure out what to do with Apple Bloom.
7720049 They are yeah! Don't worry I've got a few more CMC ship stories lined up in the future (not all Scootabelle)
7720058 Which at least helps me figure out part of a future fanfic focusing on the three of them. Sounds good, I look forward to them.
7720071 During the Christmas holiday I'll work on a few CMC ship stories, just to get them started so I don't forget about them completely lol
7720080 Makes sense, I've done that with a few fanfics too, not ready to post them yet, just good to have them started.
YA know it would be intresting if you have some time pass.
7758670 I'll be getting to that... Not gonna spoil anything!
Oh dear Luna not this again
... I always find it weird and questionable when people write Rarity or, well, any of the Mane Six like this, I'm going to give you the benefit of a doubt and hope she comes around eventually and this is at least better than the last time I read a fic that did that.
8088017 Don't worry, I have plans for that later down the line. She'll only be like that for a while
8089648 Here, read my review here to learn how not to do it:
The Secret Comes to Light Review
8089707 I've read it and that won't happen. Firstly, this is because Apple Bloom already knows about Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo and is happy that they have found each other:
This is quoted in chapter 3: Confessions
In chapter 4: An unexpected colt, this is where we begin to see that some ponies won't agree with 2 fillies or 2 stallions being together and these ponies may be stallion or mare, colt or fillies but its just how it is:
I decided to add this in just to put into perspective that some won't agree with it. As far as I know, we won't be seeing Button Mash try to break them up as I don't want that. So, he basically made that as an empty threat as we won't be seeing it happen. I don't plan for him to make a return into the story at all.
And now, we come to the most recent chapter I uploaded. This is not anything against Rarity at all but I have added in the fact that some people won't agree with their life choice to try and make it realistic. That includes family members and their views on the whole idea of the subject in general.
This is the first part of the chapter 6: Should we tell her or not? that I think might need explaining or maybe not but some people will want explanations - not saying you do, just in general.
I can relate to this. I decided to add this bit in because in every relationship (same sex or not) I feel that they should both be there for each other and help them when they need it, regardless of the time, situation or whatever. At this time in the story, Sweetie Belle needed the comfort of Scootaloo because she was worried about telling her sister about their relationship which I can understand completely.
Next part:
I can also relate to this part. I won't go into it but from the stories perspective and from how I intended it to be, Sweetie Belle's parents had told her and Rarity they want grand foals (not sure if that's how its spelt) and for that to happen, they both need to obviously get with a stallion. Now, Sweetie Belle doesn't care about that, as we can see because she is dating a filly. Rarity, on the other hand, doesn't seem to care about her sister's relationship now because she is referencing what their mom and dad told them and she is the one who is going to stick by it.
I would have gone deeper into that but I didn't want to drag the story along with them arguing about it. That might be a chapter in the future.
3rd and final part:
I'll be honest, I wasn't sure how this would work out. After reading back on it, it was a pretty good idea for me to give the decision to move Sweetie out of the Carousel Boutique for obvious reasons and it helped that Scootaloo had said she could stay with her and Rainbow Dash.
Scootaloo stuck up for her fillyfriend and that is something that couples in real life can relate to. She didn't like her tone or the way that she was acting to the news becuase it is something that some won't take very well straight away and if I'm honest, I can see Rarity as one of the pnoes that would try to split the two of them up now just becuase they have come out about it.
Sweetie Belle, just like Scootaloo, wasn't taking it well either and with what she said, she had valid reasons to say that becuase she is getting older and she will want to try new things and experiement and she how she feels and its upto Rarity and her parents to understand her reasoning behond it and only they can make the decision about accepting it or not. I think the fact that she brought the Princesses into the conversation kind of summed up the argument: If the leaders don't care about who their citizens date or what their beliefs are, nothing much can be done about it.
Finally, Rarity's little statement at the end of that was something that I really wasn't sure about. I didn't know if I wanted to add it or not but in the end, I decided to keep it in. That statement wasn't what they expected and now she'll have to pay thr price for saying what she did becuase to the majority of ponies (and people), what she did was beyond wrong and they won't tolerate it, as we will see in future chapters.
Where will this lead?
Well as far as I know, from my ideas, Rarity is going to be (hopefully) be the only one to not like the idea but all I can say is that I will try to keep it like that, it just depends on what road I take it down but if I do decide to have another pony or ponies disagree, then I have my eyes set on who that will be.
The most recent chapter and the next few ones I have planned will be hitting home for me as this will tie into real events that have happened for me and like I said, I wanna keep it realistic in some form but obviously not too much.
My conclusion
Now I have read stories like that too (not all of them centered around Sweetie Belle but they all had the same idea), only a few and I do see where you are coming from. The way you explain your reasons for how you feel is understandable and I completely agree but at the end of the day, we can't please everyone. I just hope this won't start anything, I'm just trying to shed some light on my story and hopefully it clears a few things up.
I'm probably talking a load of nonsense though which is highly likely.
8089877 Oh I have faith that you won't mess this up, at least I hope so.
8090093 I hope I don't. I don't want it to stay like this and if I do mess up, I hope you will let me know so I can correct myself on it
Crusaders of the Lost Mark was released on 10th October 2015. This fanfic came out in 2016. The time is messed up!
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