Sunset and Twilight have made a speech project for Ms. Cheerilee about a certain topic that they have been given. The topic they got is being triumphant. What did they make for this project?
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That was pretty good.
6657017 I'm glad you like it.
Hello! Nice story, I like the general theme behind this especially since it's a school project by two of the smartest ponies out there. I do have some critics though, such as the terms of writing... why in the present tense? I mean would it not sound better in the past tense? I guess it is your choice and it does give the character more depth but it's a little jarring at first.
Now on the topic of Triumph or victory, please tell me because I am genuinely curious, what is triumph for you?
6657732 I like that you like the story. Now about the style of my writing. I'm an amateur in making stories and writing in past tense is really not my style. I'll try and write in past tense at some time but for now I think present tense is better for me.
For my version of triumph its pretty much me finding out what I can do to change the world for the better or find my true self in what I love to do, as I have yet to find my passion into one hobby. Whether it be writing, video games, art, or pro wrestling, I wanna find it. You know what I'm saying?
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I get you, i mean I'm also an amateur... I mean look at my stories... god I read and even I was a little perturbed, I really need to find a frickin proofreader... anyhow... writing style, I actually did some looking and it seems that present tense does suite alot of people I guess I just never ran into many of their works.
I can understand why you write and why you do most things... trying to find out who you are still? Man I can relate, I have tried animation, writing, youtubing... but none of them really work out so I want to do something, can take a crack at your age? I'm guessing... 15-20? maybe? Thanks for your interpretation of triumph by the way, it's very enlightening but I am curious... isn't the very fact that you posted already world-changing? I mean even if not everyone sees this story... it's here right? people have seen it... it's touched someone's life maybe two, isn't that world changing?
I dunno, anyway thanks for the story mate
Yep.
Same here.
Yeah, I think she's over doing it with the worrying.