A life story of a Pegasus named, Flare Burn. He is born in Cloudsdale, but moves to the busiest city in all of Equestria and grows up there, Manehattan. However, moves back to Cloudsdale and meets a certain cyan Pegasus. They grow up together and both begin to warm up to each other.
Credit to Dashie-Potter for editing
Well, I really enjoyed! Keep up the excellent work!
6662254 Thanks you my friend. Oh and I will.
Why are there so many deleted comments?
6667629 Something that did not have to happen here. But he should have PMed me to talk about it and not on my story. And so they were not necessary to have so I deleted them all. All I really want is feed back and not being asked if I want to join a group.
As usual I have some problems with the story, but I will not add my negativity to this comment section and just say overall it's ok so like 6/10.