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Great story! It makes me wish I had this kind of life between two worlds, one that is happy-like.
I await the next chapters to see how this ends...
You have my attention.
Woah, this...Just wow...Tracked please keep this going!
Oh crap. Discord in the human world! We're screwed.
*Reads last word*
"No, No , no nononooonono
WTF is the REST!!!!!! AAEEAFEFGEGAARGRRHGRHRHGH"
Very Well Done.
First! (Couldn't resist!)
Anyhoof the Sirens were an interesting touch, even with my past minor obsession with mythology I didn't see it coming.
Keep it up!,
MrDenim
741279 i believe you forgot this,
theritz.files.wordpress.com/2009/09/moses20first20post.jpg
I spy nurse red heart correct?
I'm glad I found this when I did - This is some great work!
A spelling or grammar error here or there, but nothing to detract from the work. The story is compelling and moves well from one chapter to the next. The writing gets a little awkward in places but I'm sure practice will smooth that out. All in all I'm happy to add this to my watch list.
Woah. Was that Celestia? Wha?
img.ponibooru.org/_images/80ca9dd4a00389e1e7bf9a4f4c45e715/173881%20-%20artist%3Aaveragedraw%20changeling-queen%20Chrysalis%20cute%20queen%20queen_chrysalis%20sad.png 771965
772317 Ah that makes sense. At first I thought It was Rarity.
But this line: ["Six," I said with confidence, "A nerd, a jock, a shy girl, a rich bitch, a farm girl, and a partier."]
Best line.
771719 Yes, but where is the shoutout young padawan?
772317 Oohh Okay. Nice pic by the way.
Chrysalis? seems legit....
and I'm pretty sure that EVERY pony back in Equestria actually has their human world counterpart.... however, in almost EVERY case their memories are overwritten when they "World Shift", only ones known to retain their memories: Jenkins, Discord, apparently Chrysalis although she sounded MUCH more like Molestia... and I believe we can also add the 3 Alicorns in this list.....
I me Gusta this story
EDIT: and look at that, the moment I write this comment, a new chapter is released.... I thought I was going to sleep....
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Are you sure the ponies are world shifting?
Why would Chrysalis help William out if she was like the Chrysalis in Equestria?
Just some food for thought.
after reading, crap, shit's hitting the fan.....
Darnit - I need a way to look into the future so I can read the rest of this story
789927
then do just like the rest of us.....
wait....
791329
Or you could get me a Twilight Sparkle plushie and I could tell you the rest of the story.
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unfortunately I dont even have money to buy myself plushies and I wouldnt know where to ship it
I like the story and it's originality. Just two things
It feels like it's rushed a tad bit; there's not much between-the-action description and whatnot, it all goes fairly quickly without truly giving a good visual on the scenery and setting of each place that he ends up. Another thing: more vivid descriptions of emotions and physical feelings that the character goes through. This is all mostly from my experience of reading adventure stories that separates the ones I enjoy the most the ones that are okay. You probably would double the length of this fic (or more even) if you took the time with it.
794646
More description, got it.
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if you havent payed attention then here.
FlutterShy the f and the s are changed into her initials.
pinkie pie phoebe. p is first and last names beginning letters
twilight sparkle. tammi i assume last name starts with s
rainbow dash never payed attention to last name but it probably fits.
rarity i dont remember names for her but the author is probably OCD about this so yeah.
applejack never payed attention to her name either. or she hasnt appeared. im not THATA attentive. just a teeny bit detail focused.
anyway. her name is cammille. that means it can only translate to chrysalis or celestia.
and all the characters seem to behave within their counterparts mannerisms. seeing as celestia is in no way shape or form a slut/hooker/stripper. it has to be chrysalis. she is deceiving. mostly wayward with her intentions and pretty aggressive. i applaud the author for his attention to detail with these things.
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I adore the compliment, thank you, but scrav was speaking of the other details, like the places William and the Mane 6 go.
I'll be the first to admit the swamp and the warehouse could have used a bit more spotlight. Good to know you're enjoying the story and that I'm somehow managing to keep track of all the characters though.
Edit: and I haven't introduced Applejack or Rarity in our verse.
And RD's last name is Daniels.
812715
could to know that youre paying attention to the comments so avidly.
oh and. CLIFFHANGER.
I'm glad to see that Jenkins got back to Equestria, I was a little worried that since his Equestrian self came to Earth that he may be stuck on this side of the veil for a while.
Twilight pouted, and that's all it took
Shouldn't that be Tammy since this chapter occurs in the human world
813864
This story arc will explain how his connection to the worlds works.
814175
Fixed. Thanks for the catch.
Glad to see the that the gang's all here, but there is no way this party will end well
and now theyre gonna have to get the whole Mane 6 from Equestria through the veil with the elements and this should probably link them up with their human counterparts......
oh well..... author's note.execute
Buuuuuuuuuuuulllllllshiiiiiiiiittttt cliiiiiiiiiiiiffhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnngggggggeeeeeerrrrrrr
866266
U mad bro
866280 at the speed it takes for a new chapter to come out for this? Yes .
FIRST
Suck it.
Oh. And wonderful chapter.
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I love writing Pinkie. I had this picture of Discord crashing her party and her just screaming "PARTY FOUL!"
I can't help but wonder what Twilight will think of Tammy dating Jenkins
888154
Something tells me she won't have TOO much of a problem with it.
Well you could always name the human Shining Armor: Steve Austin the Six Million Dollar Man.
889646
I like you. You funny guy. My pet Kalshnikov Strelok like you too, maybe not shoot you. Show you around glorious Motherland!
First
- then 
followed immeadiatly by 
and through it all
such an awesome chapter!
I was:
all the way to the fuckin' moon.
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Well, I had to get the sub plot started eventually. lol
901051
Is that a good thing.
There is only one thing I didnt like about this chapter. It ended.
901136 I believe it is. Exact sequence of my face:
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Oh, well, guess I'll just have to write more then.
ok..... I see 3 possibilities as for why Pinkie knows all of their human names....
1. She remembers stuff between both dimensions
2. They ALL cross the veil when they sleep but besides Pinkie, the rest of the Mane 6 TRY to keep this fact hidden
3. She's just Pinkie Pie
however.... seeing as how: Discord, Chrysalis and more than likely the princesses too also remember, it seems more likely that it's number 2....
Oh shit! It's the suits! FBI! CIA! MIB! Crap, RUN!!!!