One day while Fluttershy as walking in the woods, she found a strange creature. This creature says that her name is Miia (from Everyday life with monster girls). How will Miia get along in a place like Equestria, a land that is always in a positive mood, is like a living musical, and most of all, filled with herbivores. How will the ponies get along with Miia and how she is very different from them. This is a story of her time there.
Teen for language/swearing, and sexual comments.
this was pretty good. Will you be making more stories based around the rest MonSu gang
Besides some grammar and spelling mistakes it's pretty good. If you want I can help you with that
More please there are no other monster musume stories on fim fic
This looks like a great premise, and it's cool that this is the first Monster Musume crossover on this site. There are a few tiny typos, but other than that the story's great.
This story looks great so far, I hope you can continue it soon!
YES! IT'S ALIVE MUAHAHAHA
She will mention darling right?
Most likely (Creed M). He is the center of the universe to her so I am going to throw that in at some point; but that doesn't mean that Kimihito will be in the story.
When are you gonna do an update?
I love monster musume!
So would that be prance and fleece now based on the pony puns.