Hmm, that was actually one of the most well done scenes I've ever read between a pony and a human. The next part should be very interesting if it's anything like this chapter.

Once again I find that you have an incredible grasp on the sensual aspect of these stories. This is very intimate and passionate, in a way I have simply come to expect when you write a story. It makes them a real joy to read.
They are also extremely hot.

Is good.

How did this get 2(+1) comments and barely a hundred likes? I'd really expect eight to ten times either by this moment.

Ponies aren't normally written to have incisors. Good chapter, though.

This chapter was fun and very sexy. Nice work! And by nice work of course I mean "Damn that was freaking sexy and hot and wow I love your writing." Sorry to be so brief.

2871685 Just for the info, Darf's Girl's Night runs on this theme. I'm looking forward to what you have to write, Aurora. You put a lot of soul into your writing that I really enjoy. Just sayin'...

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Ah, thank you; I hope I can keep it up.

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Haha, well, that's generally exactly what I'm going for -- somewhere between funny and sensual and just plain hot. And thank you so much for your continued support and comments, Paladin... Really. It means a lot.

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Well, I'm pretty happy with the reception it's gotten, given how rusty I felt and how nervous I was about releasing a story again. I mean, at first the likes and dislikes were nearly tied for a while, and I was once again convinced I'd written the worst thing ever...

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They aren't? I'm no expert on equine dentition, so I may very well be mistaken here, but... Without incisors, they'd only have molars and premolars and such -- how would they eat? They're grazing animals by origin, and they eat fruits and plants and the like, so they would need some cutting teeth near the front, right? R-right?

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Oh, well, I'm very happy you found the work to be... nice.

And thank you for the tip! I believe I may have read that story in the past -- since I read pretty much everything by Darf; him being a master of the ancient and noble craft of clopsmithing -- but it sounds like I may need to look it up again. Y'know, for, erm, "reference material" and "inspiration."

Yeah. That.

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As a side note, regarding the topic 2881076 brought up, I looked up equine teeth, and they do have incisors up front, and even canines.
Also, horse skulls are really creepy.

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Yeap, I looked it up too. I am glad that pony mouths are not completely molars and premolars. That image is almost as creepy as horse skulls are, too.

I was under the impression that only carnivores and omnivores had incisors and canines. I know nothing!

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Incisors are vital to being able to tear food from whatever it's attached too, and this includes plants too. A horse's canines are REALLY tiny from what the image showed, however, they are probably there because horses can, and on very rare occasions do, eat meat. (I repeat, this is vanishingly rare.)
The more you know!

(I have always wanted to say that. )

I'm liking this even more.

This entire story is absolutely brilliant. In only two chapters, you've done what most writers don't do in a hundred, and that is write poetry. Every single word is exactly where it should be, perfectly describing the fervid lovemaking session between a human (a female one at that! I'm glad to see you break from the norm and do it so well) and a heartbroken pony. I can feel the lust and passion emitting from my computer screen as I read it. Your words are so strong and powerful, and yet so lighthearted. It's so entertaining to read the drunken fumblings of the two characters. The description is such that I feel like I'm sitting there in the room, both hands on a bag of popcorn (where else would they be?) as I watch these two clumsy and lovable characters engage in the sideways hokey pokey. The worst part of the story is the fact that it doesn't have upwards of fifty chapters out. It's so beautiful and I can't wait to read more.

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Eep. I, uh, I really don't know what to say to that, other than thank you.

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I'll accept it. I don't think I need thanks for recognizing something beautiful, though.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

srsly its so hard to find any human x pony stories written for female bronies, and this one is written so, SO well!! can't wait to see this continue!

Just a quick note to those curious:

I've unpublished the third chapter for now, since I am planning to rewrite it somewhat. I'll probably write a blogpost about this once I get home, explaining the how and why in greater detail.

My sincere apologies if this has caused any inconvenience to any of my readers. Hopefully it'll be back up soon, and better than ever.

I find the inability to locate a Chapter Three very disturbing....

Hey, is the third chapter still going to be reposted?

I linked this to my fillyfooler friend. She said:

>As if I would be interested in such things!
>I will read this later!

i just wanna say that i still check this out every day to see if the revised 3rd chapter is up et. i still love this story and im still really sorry i overreacted and said things that were too hurtful, i really hope ur still working on this and dont intend to give up on it, i feel terrible thinking that maybe im part of the reason that this story might not be finished, i should've kept my big mouth shut so at least some ppl could have an ending they liked at least

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It's okay. It's not your fault.

It really isn't anyone's fault but my own that it hasn't been published yet; I just really, really suck at this.

I have actually started working on it again a few days ago, after a long period of doing nothing but helping out some of the giants on whose shoulders I occasionally try to hop for a piggyback ride. It's going quite well, all things considered, as I'm expanding on the sections I really should have fleshed out more in the previous incarnation, whilst getting rid of the sloppy, ill-considered sections.

(I just sincerely hope that nobody has any objections to strap-ons in their lesbian sex... )

Also, I think I've finally thought of a better ending; still in line with what I'd originally envisioned, but less depressing and disjointed -- I hope.

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Is it?

I won't pretend to know a whole lot of French, but I was basing the titles on the expression La Part Des Anges (The Angels' Share). I.e., the part of any spirit that evaporates during cask-maturation. So I kinda thought 'part' was the right word to use...

Correct me if I'm wrong.

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i'm really glad to hear this hasnt been abandoned or anything and that ur back in the game and doing well with it, thanks for the reassurance! and i cant speak for anyone else but i like strap-ons just fine, altho i still feel guilty enough that i wouldnt complain about anything like that at this point no matter what, i explained myself before but im still sorry that i didnt behave properly from the start

I really liked this. I thought the particulars of pony mating, such as the heavy emphasis on scent and nuzzling, was very interesting and different. It's a shame you don't write anymore...

When is this amazing fic gonna get an update? =P

And I don't remember Aurora saying whether or not she's given up writing... Has she? Have you? Please don't let it be so!

I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Wow, I would really like some more of this! I'm dying to see the roles reversed. Pretty please at least post the unpublished chapter? :)

Can anyone recommend good female pony/female human fics? This is the first I've read and now I'm just hungry for more.

I should be quite interested in more of this. The rapport between Octavia and "us" is delightfully cute. I realise it's been about two years, but I'll be putting it on my watch list anyway.

Welp, I wasn’t disappointed.... I hope chapter 3 comes around soon though.... I hope...