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My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
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Good story, definitely lol'd several times.
Somepony needs to get this poor guy a cider soon.
Hell to Pay.
As far as things go, it's a really straightforward story in terms of pacing and plot progression. Chapters are short but that's all up to an author's desire to jeep rolling with any chapter, really.
Overall it's okay
Onward through the chapters