Her Royal Highness, Queen Celestia, is a multiversal conqueror. Her might is known throughout several Earths and many accompanying galaxies. The losing races she converts, and then she moves on to the next ones.
But her conquests are mostly confined to worlds that have not had alien visitors before. It is a convenience she has enjoyed, but every good thing must come to an end.
Especially since her newest target has already been invaded. And now, Xenolestia has to face her biggest challenge yet.
Competition.
Chapters (3)
The grammar's good and the dialog flows smoothly.
I especially like how the Newfoals are modified to be more "normal" because Xenocidestia was creeped out by their constant smiling.
I potentially see this Xenocidestia being extremely dangerous. She's a conqueror but she is logical, cool and pragmatic.
liked and tracked
A promising start. I believe the proper end to any sentence starting "Contingency plan for a planet of Discords" is either "... run far, far away." or "open a portal to the Q Continuum for general hijinks."
I think this is a bit too fast paced, I think you should slow down. I am interested to see what happens, but I have a lot of questions. Like why does Xenolestia seem to only want to conquer human world's when it's very likely there are other races she might hate just as much? how many new foals does celestia now have if she has conquered multiple Earths already then she must have a massive army of newfoals? Can Celestia's massive army even be stopped by a singular world? And why does Xenolestia plan to conquer an infinite universe when she should know that not only will her goal never end, but she'll also eventually meet defeat when she comes across a universe that was set up to defeat her.
I do want to see where the story goes and I hope you do a good job.
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As I have already alluded to, with each victory, her power grows only stronger.
As for the rest, you'll have to wait and see.
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That, or "Let Twilight handle it."
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Thank you.
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I'm sure it will be full of surprises. :::;)
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I did indulge in a bout of evil, evil laughter upon reading that comment.
I so love it when my readers inspire me. ::::)
Why can't this universe die already!?
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Oh, it will.
But these things take time.
I have more questions than answers.
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Just. As. Planned.
So instead of ponies everyone is a Draconequus's? I kinda want to see how the CMC, Trixie, and Starlight Glimmer would look like?
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How'd you know you haven't seen them?
Well.
[SPOILERS], at any rate.
Are humans going to show up soon? Or did I miss them somehow?
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They have already shown up, yes.
And that's all I'll say on the matter.
You are Evil.....EVIL!
well we say silver spoon at lease.