When everyone abandons you, who will stand by?
When everyone turns on you, who will protect you?
When the closest to you betray you, who will catch their blade?
When all goes wrong, who will fix it?
ME
I have watched this world since its birth.
And I happen to like you.
So rejoice, I will protect you.
And to my enemies
Beware
For I do not bring forgiveness,
But instead a sword.
First serious attempt at a story. Will contain some dark themes and mentions of gore. A more feel-good and mystery story than an angst ridden one.
If the creator of the cover image wants me to change it I will be happy to.
Chapters (5)
Why are the chapters so short?
6804380 They are set up to be short stories and I am not a good writer. they will get longer as the story and my writing skills progress. do you know how hard it is to sit down and creatively write up 1000 to 1500 words?
6806892 1000 to 1500 words? more easy than it looks like
creatively? thats (kinda) the problem :|
7081593 yeah. but hey, I'm 700 words into another chapter. Should be out around the next month.
7081604 oh god O_o a month?
(kinda like me thought)
7081613 maybe sooner
well this is a interesting take.
the guy in the coat reminds me of The Outsider, not good or evil just gives you power to do as you wish with.
7111689 Thank you! What's your favorite part?
7111730 That's a great comparison, although my guy is much more biased on which decision he wants you to take. Also, I have a question. He used to have a job, going from what I told you in the story, what do you think the job was?
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Hmm possibly a fallen angel trying to atone for his mistakes? or maybe even a normal person with a destiny forced on to him
7138155 Almost, you hit on two parts, The normal guy and the atoning for a mistake. A chapter with backstory will be up soonish
Hmm interesting when it said angel by your side I wasn't expecting him to be a real angel.
7251406 I'm full of surprises. Angel is a good term for what he is, if inaccurate. His sister is more of what is considered and Angel. I have a specific name for what he is. I will reveal it soon.
Hint, wings are important. We have seen his wings before, only on another person. Also, he has an interesting connection with fire. Theories please
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hmm, so he has actual wings of fire interesting which would mean he was the one defending the pony, which also means that he was a soldier of some kind. You said he was atoning for his mistakes which could mean he was the one who set the beings upon his people, whether by accident or design. The significance of the flaming wings, that he gained through "bloodshed and chaos"1, can't think of any significance if this was a crossover with D&D i would say that he could come from one of the outer positive planes but this isn't so I don't know.
Ch.5 "A simple tale"- Angel by your side - author: H550
7255079 almost completely right. We have seen him before he got his wings. His atonement does not have to do with letting the beings free. He couldn't do that. His atonement is self placed. He holds many things in common with a certian legendary bird...
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Phoenix, that means that he was the one fighting in a story by the fire interesting.
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he's been telling his tale, and so have I, through people. Everything else is spoilers. Theories?
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Wait he saw someone take a pose to defend him so that means he couldn't be the one fighting he was the one being defended, which means he's a toning for something else maybe not being able to defend someone maybe a kid or a loved one. Hmm
7441177 storyteller is not the one in the story. The familiar pose was the one trench coat took in his tale.
7441749 oh well the was shot out of the water
7441752 what?
7441914 what are you asking?
7441920 had a hard time deciphering what you typed. Trench coat is atoning for something. Look at what he says and how he acts. Think about what he has seen