Secrecy

A stealthy intruder breaches the castle and evades the guards without anyone suspecting a thing, even the princess didn't realize this skillful pony was there... until he strikes! (read the story first, comments might ruin that princess's fate!)

P.S.: the room is VERY dark

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CuriousCurse

CuriousCurse #1 · Jun 1st, 2012 · · ·

For some reason I was tempted to go clopfic out of freakin no where but I figured it would be more enjoyable and give more people a good, slightly trolled laugh if I kept it "innocent" at the end. Please don't feel hesitant to point out any mistakes but be aware it is a one shot that was made overnight.

OOPS! forgot to submit it! I thought I only had to click publish for some reason. I did some minor editing but it appears I'll have to wait until tomorrow for the small collection of comments I had anticipated today.

Glare

Glare #2 · Jun 2nd, 2012 · · ·

xD
A couple of misspellings, but nothing major. A good story

weerikkiroo

weerikkiroo #3 · Jun 2nd, 2012 · · ·

ha very good misdirection i totaly thought that it was an assasination atempet

Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #4 · Jun 2nd, 2012 · · ·

Funny at the end.

CuriousCurse

CuriousCurse #5 · Jun 3rd, 2012 · · ·

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I have been met with approval and tastes of... sand? Oh well, at least it's high quality sand! 3 likes is a start although me being a bit obscure to the FIMFiction community atm probably means that only a handful of people will see this. Thank you for those who did comment and like, you make the darkness of budding writership a little more pleasant and inspire authors to make more material. Thank you!