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Mountainmanmad


You want to know how to write a good story? You take a group of interesting, likable, wonderful characters, and you turn their lives into Hell on Earth. -- Chris Claremont

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I know the sex scene wasn't very long, but it's mostly to get the plot rolling and explain Lilith's plans for the future. That will change in the coming chapters as I write more in-depth scenarios. Write a comment on who you would like to see the next victim to be and I'll see what I can do. You can even suggest a kink or two you would like to see. I'll write out the highest voted suggestion. Think of it as if I'm taking requests... sort of.

"Lilith? I've never heard of her. Who is she?"
"She's a whore," Cadance muttered darkly.

Wow, Cadance. Tell us what you really think.

Hmmm. Interesting premise. Succubi and Incubi are a popular type of demonic/monstrous beings, being able to be equally human or inhuman pending on the author.

6621545 Given the chance, I'm sure she'd love to.

6621611 I figured I should add the Human tag just in case. I know technically Succubi and Incubi aren't human, but I figured it was better to be on the safe side.

Nice so far, so definitely a like from me. I would just love it if you indented the paragraphs though. That would be nice.

I vote FIlthy Rich. Lord knows he pays for his sex...

Got to suggest Lilith getting double teamed by Bulk Biceps and Big Mac. I think with their stamina even she would feel satisfied. And Vinyl Scratch with Ocatvia where Vinyl sees if it's possible to use wubs instead of a dildo.

And if there's ever a time she isn't feeling like sexy fun times, have her befriend a few ponies. I'd love to see her pull a demon transformation on Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon to scare them away from the Crusaders only for the Crusaders to praise her and start asking her questions.

On one hand, I know this will be written very well. On the other, I've never been a fan of succubi.

Decisions decisions...

6621650 I'm afraid there won't be any indenting from me. While yes, technically you're supposed to indent upon starting a new paragraph, this doesn't really work in free writing so much.

6623590 "You should give it a try~!"

6624460 You can ask for fetishes, of course I'm better at writing some more than others. You can also decide on Lilith's next target if you want too. It can pretty much be any species on the planet. Think of this story more as a melting pot of smut.

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Aw.... Okay. I suppose I should contribute to the story anyway. Lilith's next target should either be Filthy Rich or Queen Chrysalis herself, if she'd even appear in this story for that. God I'd love to see that....

I think it would be interesting for her to take on the main six all at once

6624848 Sex demon vs Love bug.

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