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Steve rogers--also known as Captain America--was forced to crash a Hydra bomber plane into the arctic. The reason being that he had to save the lives of hundreds. He knew he wasn’t going to survive the impact of the crash, but life is full of surprises.
The Captain wakes up only to find himself in an unfamiliar world, surrounded by the most unlikely of things. Talking ponies.
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Interesting.
6550039 Glad a caught your fancy. What do you find interesting thus far?
How Luna found Nightmare Moon and I'm looking forward to see how Steve is going to react to everyting. You should make sure that he gets himself a mare.
6550085 Ah, I see. That part was the most fun part to write in this chapter, took inspiration from listening to songs like confrontation.
As for Steve getting a mare, that's gonna be a long maybe. Depends on how the concept works to the overall story.
And now, 'Olde English 101', by Leo Archon.
The words 'thee', 'thou', 'thy', and 'thine' are meant to refer to the person you are talking to, not yourself. Here's some basics:
- 'Thou': old informal version of the word 'you', used as the first subject in a sentence; Thou art a mapmaker?
- 'Thee': another informal 'you', used for subsequent subjects in a sentence; I have little time for thee.
- 'Thy': old informal version of 'your'; What is thy profession?
- 'Thine': old informal version of 'yours'; I wouldst be thine, if thou wouldst have me.
Let's take the following sentence as an example:
The word 'thine' in this sentence should be 'thee', and the word 'thy' should be 'my', or 'our' as Luna favors the Royal 'We'. Speaking of, Royal 'We' basics:
- Use 'we' in place of 'I' or 'I'm'
- Use 'our' in place of 'My' or 'Mine'
6550153 I thought for sure thy was to refer to yourself? Well we can't all be winners. Thanks for the little guide by the way, I'll be editing these new revisions as soon as possible.
Awww.... I was just writing something like this! Oh, well. You did it better. Back to the drawing board...
6550286 Don't let my story get in the way of your creative freedom. Go out there and write that story you majestic bastard!
(This has been a inspirational speech by Majestic Hamster).
6550300
"That... that was beautiful!"
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6550286 Actually, there's only two Captain America crossovers (counting this one) that I know of, and the other one is by Onomonopia, who is a great author in crossovers.
MMLPU?
6551121 Hmmm... I may continue mine then...
6551391 Might as well!
There's not enough crossover of him and MLP!!
6551309 Marvel My Little Pony Universe,
6551405 That is one of the reasons why I'm crossing him over. The other being that I love Marvel.
I hat to nit-pick but i feel like it would be something like "curse these flying rats!"
Also i don't really like that he just showed up near the castle with (besides the obvious changes) no negative effects from the plane crash, whatever brought him here, or even the fact that he crashed into the arctic sea
and the opening with luna and the night mare is just to outta nowhere for me to ignore
i'll follow this story for it's potential and because i hope it'll get better in future chapters
I do like the idea of sending captain america to equestria or any hero for that matter.
but this in my opinion just isn't that good of a start
Ys I love it
When Captain America throws his mighty shield,
All those who chose to oppose his shield must yield.
If he’s lead to a fight and a duel is due,
Then the red and the white and the blue’ll come through.
When Captain America throws his mighty shield.
Cool.
If he is going to stay in equestria, what I hope, then it would be nice if he could have a romance. I´m not sure how to say this, but since I know him from that one movie, I think he could have a potential nice romance, just because of his personality. I don´t know, it could be the soldier thing, that makes me wanting that.
However nice story, the romance part, was just my first impulse.
6558585 That is a really long maybe on the romance. If I was to include one it would have to be in some later installment. This being the first part of a saga of stories. The Captain seems more along the lines of a person who is loyal to one person. If he was to get with someone else it would take a long time for them to develop that connection... That is actually a neat idea to work with, I may work with that sometime in the future.
Thanks for the compliment as well. Glad you enjoyed it thus far.
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Really nice chapter, and even if I like the action, I can´t reall wait till we got the first meeting between him, and Celestia, or other important Ponys. I just like those first moment´s if they just meet each other for the first time.
I notice that I like him more than I thought, even if it is just you using him in a two chapters till now.
As for the romance, it would be okay if you do that this way, he is just one of those persons, that would look like a really good dad, or a special somepony in this case
6558930 Since this is during the time of the Lunar rebellion, he is definitely going to meet ponies of great historical importance. Such as the like of Celestia and Star Swirl the Bearded. Gonna have to world build though due to the lack of information about this time period, but that just makes this writing experience more fun.
The more I think about it, the more I can imagine him being a great father. That really does work with his personality.
There's a couple issues in terms of grammar, like "I'm" instead of "am", but other than a few issues like those, a good first chapter.
I would like to have a new chapter please.
THAT'S how you use a shield.