What if Fluttershy's mom came in and saw this

H-Hot...

God job

DAMN

I was expecting someone to walk in on them, this might have been a bad idea to read.

Holy shit that was super HOT! Very well done :) hope to see more stories like this ^^

The spanking made me more uncomfortable than the watersports.
I gain pretty much zero arousal from rough play and bdsm related topics.

Is it weird that I find the pee drinking itself sexy but licking up floor residue along with it disgusting? Gotta drink it straight from the tap so it's sure to be clean

All in all, great story. Very sweet of Sunset to offer herself this way And Fluttershy's obvious desire to watch Sunset drink pee provides some nice conflict for a potential sequel

You would think shy would have a dom fetish. Sub fetish for her is so... Expected. Nontheless, it was a very steamy read, the piss drinking isn't for me though.

This is going into my folder.... For um. Personal use.

Sunset was staring straight at her, face devoid of all emotion.

That is some bloody good acting.

“...Uh-huh.” Sunset looked away. “Well, I did star as Tree #4 in a school musical once.”

....Brilliant.

Now I'm kind of wondering what Sunset's fetishes are in this universe. They were never mentioned. XD

I had a blast! Good job!

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Well, I have written two other fics about her...

At least, she tried to unlock the door. SheHer hands were shaking and her body was trembling,

I like this story.

I like this version better. But then again, I have my own fetishes now dont I ;-)

Why do I just see what's featured in the stories as black rectangles

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They're in spoiler tags. If you're on a computer, scroll over them with your mouse. If you're on mobile, highlight the box, then copy/paste it somewhere else.

I love how chapter 3 has more views than chapter 2. In for a penny, in for a pound!

What if her real parents came in.

Poor Fluttershy, she needs a fetlife account so she can find a mommy Domme.

Brilliant idea for a Sequel...Sunset finds out about another Fetish Fluttershy has...One that involves a role reversal with Fluttershy being the mean girl bully and Sunset Shimmer being the meek shy girl...to which Sunset actually shares such a Fetish still having some feelings of guilt over what she'd put poor Fluttershy through

Well, won't deny that it was enjoyable.
I'm glad that there was nothing too... mean-spirited in this. That earned it a like.
Nice to see someone living out a fetish.
Sunset is one damn good friend.
So a sequel would be Fluttershy helping Sunset with her fetish, which would probably involve stallions. Two sequels with one story.
Do you have any ideas on a sequel?

I, like Sunset, am not into watersports myself, but I will admit, it wasn't as bad as I thought it'd be. Also like Sunset, however, I don't know if I'll go seeking it out in the near future, but it was an enjoyable time to be had. Also, I like to imagine that chapters 2 and 3 aren't parallel, but sequential: the first time with Fluttershy went so well, Flutters felt a bit more comfortable with sharing her other fetish.

I'm not a fan of the more explicit content, but good story
I first came across this on another site that left out Chapter 1 and the ending, so until I read it here I had no idea Sunset was doing exactly what Fluttershy wanted her to, and that it was all Fluttershy's fetish
Also, about the description, is Fluttershy really a massive pervert just for having a fetish? Sunset even said everyone has them. (I just got over a brief bout of insecurity over mine)
So the only way a writer can actually bring themselves to have Fluttershy wet herself is for her to have a fetish for it? Well, despite my preferences, I don't really care whether it's accidental or intentional (in fiction/fanfiction, of course)

Clop Version three:
Sunstet yelled "Dammit Fluttershy! You are f*cking sick!!" *Blams the door behind her"

END!

I could see the title and title of the first chapter being sung to the tune of "I shot the sherrif"

This was interesting and a bit new for me. The level of watersports mostly was new, especially with these characters. I don't become disgusted by watersports, but it also doesn't really get my engine running so to speak. Though it fascinated me, I cringed a bit at the thought of drinking that much urine, and off the floor nonetheless. Though this was more intended for the people who are more into that than I am.

The writing was good overall, descriptive, and well constructed. It was an interesting read that had a little something different than what I usually see. It was creative and cute, and I like the way Fluttershy and Sunset were portrayed.

A very good fic written quite well! Not often you see watersports and humiliation stories like this written with a good story. I was quite impressed :D Being the horny little fimfic reader I am, I would have liked to see more from this, like actual public humiliation, but it was still good without Hope to see more by you soon

This turned out to be a fantastic story. I wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading, but I can tell there was some planning and thought that went into this. Really good job by the author for getting an alternative ending to work so well in this. Those are hard to pull off, and while I don't have a fetish like that, it was still entertaining to read.

How does a fetish story have so many upvotes? Especially one containing omorashi? Mine all have under 100 upvotes, and many more downvotes.

Well, congratulations on your success.

I'll be honest I was expecting more. I mean I guess incest role play is a little weird I guess.

That...was very cute. I really liked the detail you went into about the two characters. Especially Suitset Shimmer. That’s a big yis.

Also, in terms of kink identification, I’m very glad you were thorough with it. The kinks in the second clop chapter are a big turn-off for me, so I’m glad I didn’t get blindsided by it.

Sweet and sexy.

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"I'm going to punish your for peeing on the floor, but a spanking is DEFINITELY out of the question."

Sunset grabbed Fluttershy's hand and placed it between her thighs before returning to pleasuring her daughter. Now they were both fingering one another at the same time, trembling as one.

Never seen that one before. Nice.

oh that's

“I thought you said you weren't going to act out anymore,” Sunset said, each word sharp as a knife. “But now look at you: peeing all over the floor, just like a child. You lied to me again.”

I somehow misread that so bad, I thought she was holding a knife-