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Rough Hooves


An average joe who loves nothing more than to express himself through his writing

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Having been turned down by Twilight, Flash finds comfort in an unlikely source, Crystal Prep's resident rocker girl, Lemon Zest.

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Comments ( 40 )

I approve of this ship. Let Lemontry begin!

I only like Flash when he's being shipped with other characters for fun! I ship him with Sonata Dusk, Lyra, Sour Sweet...and I guess now with Lemon Zest! This was nice!

I will always only support Flash being with Twilight, but I admit this was a good story and nice to see Flash in a positive light. So overall good job.

I approve of this ship as well. And thank you for not Flash bashing, poor guy has had enough.

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Girls like Twilight or Sunset usually prefer smart cookies like themselves for long term romantic relationships (aka guys who don't space out when they are been talked about advanced maths ).
It makes far more sense for Flash to end with a girl with similar interests like music.

I like this ship. It makes sense, given the tiniest bit of character we are able to see from them.

The worst part is that this one actually makes sense.

Oh no, do you realize what you just done!? *Sees a big pile coming.* YOU'VE JUST UNLEASHED A FRESH WAVE OF...*Gets swept up by the pile.* ... SLASH FICTION!!!!!!! (I have no idea what slash fiction is.)

That was really cute. I especially love her giving him her number. ^-^

Comment posted by Rough Hooves deleted Oct 14th, 2015

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Hey Princess Cadence,

Thank you so very much for your feedback. I will definitely take your opinions into consideration in my future works. I also have to agree with you on how some of the situations and parts of the story seemed forced, particularly Lemon's speech and the song names.

Thanks again for your feedback

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Thank you all so much for your comments. Hopefully the ship takes flight

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Thanks for the comments all. Yeah, poor Flash gets it rough sometimes though.

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Hey XtremBoo,

Thanks for commenting, will be sure to check your story out when I can.

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Same sex romantic ship fiction.

Very nice...:moustache:

6523122 It's fun to pronounce Lemontry like Lemon Tree.

6526846 youre right, that IS fun! Lemon Tree. Lemontry.
LemmmoonnTREEEEEEE!
…idk anymore:unsuresweetie:

Makes a lot of sense!
The Master of Saikyou-Ryuu approves!
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6527911 I wonder how, and I wonder why :raritywink:

6528043 Dan is streetest fighter. Sucks how he lost to Hercule...

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I see that you are a fellow fan of the Dan Hibiki podcast, the source in all things Dan Hibiki, with charismatic host Dan Hibiki.

6528250 please tell me you'll write about the date:applecry:

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Um...I think you replied to the wrong comment.

6531923 wha… what the heck? I didn't even… :facehoof:
I wasn't replying to anyone! Just… gah!:facehoof:
Facehoof for days!:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

Wow...im 100 % flashlight but Lemon x Flash seems so...Interesting and it could totally work out so....Now i ha a new ship

Love this!! So excited to see where this goes!!!!!

So Awesome!!!! Congratulations Flash Sentry, you have a date!!! And it's Lemon Zest!!! Awesome story creator!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Excellent ship fic, my friend! Admittedly, I half-expected Flash to shred a riff from Stains of Time.

“I’m a girl who appreciates a hot lick.”

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And... I'm officially supporting this pairing. :twilightsmile:

Is there any chance of a sequel with these two?

Or maybe I should just write about them myself...

I now love Lemon Zest. :rainbowderp:
The fact that I actually understood what she was saying was satisfying.
Great characterisation!

That goes for Flash too; really hope we get a bit more development for him in future.

Overall: an awesome fic. :twilightsmile:
That's an up-vote and a favourite.

Need to see one or two more stories of this ship, but I am intrigued.

This was pretty nice. Suffice to say, I now ship Lemonflash! :yay:

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