Day 1 of One$#!+ober: A crappy story every day of the month!
Throughout Equestria, unfortunate things happen to unfortunate creatures. These are their stories.
"Of all the terrible batponies in the world, you're the least terrible."~PresentPerfect🐴Ponk & GlimGlam are best ponies🐴Text 714-496-3119 with the name of an MLP character to get a cute picture!
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Personally I think flash gets too much hate I also think that he would marry twilight on the first chance he gets but the bronie tears was funny
Why don't you just write "prologue" as the title?
~Leonzilla
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It's all written in one long paragraph.
It kinda reminds me of this.
~Leonzilla
It sounds like Pinkie is telling the story rather than Twilight. Not just because of the way it wonders into tangents so often; but also because of all the things the narrator shouldn't even know about.
~Leonzilla
If Google didn't confirm it I would be convinced you made it up. I can't believe this story thought me something, a new word.
That's a lie. Studies show that people tend to assume attractive people are more socially adept which is only true as a self fulfilling prophecy. That's all.
It was the exact opposite of that! You got to tell the truth even when it could hurt somebody because not doing so could cause more damage in the long run.
But I'm sure you knew that.
~Leonzilla