I like the story ^_^ you also have the same writing quality as me.

I like the story but I feel as though they became friends too fast, I figured that both Black Daze and Chrysalis would be a little more stubborn towards each other, since BD did burn Chrysalis' wings a bit and BD was attacked by the Changlings. This is an interesting read so I want to know how this story rolls out
A few things: "Some of the back ponies flew out of fear" I'm pretty sure you meant "black ponies" and you used 'Black creatures/ponies/etc' quite a bit in the fight scene it's already established that he is fighting Changlings and have a description of them so repeating the description over an over feels filling

Epic character CHECK
Background story CHECK
Fav and tracking CHECK!!!

Yay pretty awsome!!!!!!!...but it's on hiatus...bummer... I'd really like MOAR!!!!!

Looks good, but the growth in relationship is rushed, and seems against the previously established character for Black Daze.