So sorry the chapter is short and not on par. I was really battle bruise when I wrote this, and I am still very very sick while typing this...AND it's late at night. I felt so sorry for you guys to wait for such a long time that I just had to finish it. Talk about development hell!
Don't worry, I'll make up for it with a blog post I'll within the next day or so. Keep your eyes peeled.
The only thing I see that needs to be fixed is the "rear buttocks" part in the fourth paragraph. it's rear or buttocks, but not both. Unless he has some kind of weird front-butt that needs to be differentiated from the normal one.
I'm very glad you are back! I was really starting to miss this story. When I get some free time I will look for mistakes and I will make sure to post them.
The only thing I can see now is that you add the quotations right after the commas, they need to have a space in between. But, I'm just a Grammar Nazi, so I nitpick. I hope you feel better soon
Okay, I usually hate self inserts and stay away from bad clops, and clops in general due to the high amount of them. But you, sir, have given me hope for the future of visual clops on this site. I favorite this, thumb this up, and wish to see more of it soon. Well, the fifth chapter, of course. Great job and keep on improving. You might just get people to get extremely aroused!
lol, it's the tentacle rape monster lover bed. Tucker says he owns one but only uses it when lady friends show up or when someones Mom visits... like the character that tried giving me a hot dog with pickles...
oh hell no my andaconda aint havin none of that wait wich ass thought you mean molestias oh chrysalis ummmmm fuck it why not need to get rid of my virginaty anyway then why ??????????????????????????????? oh i dont even know what im talking about ok COMRADS WE ALL BECOME PART OF SOIL! oh p.s does this take place in i human and you verse or no pm me please
So sorry the chapter is short and not on par. I was really battle bruise when I wrote this, and I am still very very sick while typing this...AND it's late at night. I felt so sorry for you guys to wait for such a long time that I just had to finish it. Talk about development hell!
Don't worry, I'll make up for it with a blog post I'll within the next day or so. Keep your eyes peeled.
In the mean time, to make up for such torture...have a silly song I made up based on a song I heard from an old Disney cartoon that's about fatty foods and lard.
The only thing I see that needs to be fixed is the "rear buttocks" part in the fourth paragraph. it's rear or buttocks, but not both. Unless he has some kind of weird front-butt that needs to be differentiated from the normal one.
dang you had it rough, and the chapter was acceptable along as you'll be able to get back into the swing of things when your of better health........
I'm very glad you are back! I was really starting to miss this story. When I get some free time I will look for mistakes and I will make sure to post them.
Back from the doctors. Found out I also have an ear infection
What have I done wrong
The only thing I can see now is that you add the quotations right after the commas, they need to have a space in between. But, I'm just a Grammar Nazi, so I nitpick. I hope you feel better soon
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Well you ARE 42, the answer to life the universe and everything, so I must follow your instructions
Okay, I usually hate self inserts and stay away from bad clops, and clops in general due to the high amount of them. But you, sir, have given me hope for the future of visual clops on this site. I favorite this, thumb this up, and wish to see more of it soon. Well, the fifth chapter, of course. Great job and keep on improving. You might just get people to get extremely aroused!
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lol, it's the tentacle rape monster lover bed. Tucker says he owns one but only uses it when lady friends show up or when someones Mom visits... like the character that tried giving me a hot dog with pickles...
oh hell no my andaconda aint havin none of that wait wich ass thought you mean molestias oh chrysalis ummmmm fuck it why not need to get rid of my virginaty anyway then why ??????????????????????????????? oh i dont even know what im talking about ok COMRADS WE ALL BECOME PART OF SOIL! oh p.s does this take place in i human and you verse or no pm me please