Visions from Another eye

by Cringe Queen

Old note

Twilight dusted the books of spells and found a....trap door?

"This is like that one time.....oh well we haven't had adventure for a while!" She opened it."A note?"

"Dear Twilight,

If you found this this mean you had become a princess!
Here is a interesting spell i would like you to see! I'm sorry
if I'm acting a bit strange in this letter, Luna and me have
been angry for a while and I'm a bit scared. So here is how
to perform the spell!"
There was some instructions to a spell.

"Looks easy enough! Spike!" Twilight called.

"Yes Twilight?" Spike asked.

"Go get the elements! I have to try out this spell!" said Twilight.

"Yes ma'am!" Spiked hurried off.

An hour or so later Spike came back with the girls. He had a crystal cupcake in his hands that he was eating hungrily.

"I hope you payed for that Spike," said Twilight.

"Yes i did....on a different note, can I borrow some bits?" asked Spike nervously.

"Your lucky your a cute baby dragon," said Twilight annoyed. She flew to her room and got a few bits and gave them to Spike who gave it to Pinkie.

"Ok girls, this may be rushed but i need to make do this spell with you guys!" said Twilight.

"This better be fast, I have to train," said Rainbow.

"Ok, first step. Get in a circle," everyone did as told."Not put youngest in circle," they pushed Spike in the middle." Now for me to do the spell!"

They all stood tall and a burst of color full lights blinded everyone.

Next thing Twilight knew, she was in her house in Cantorlot.

Comments

[ponichaeism]

"This is like that one time.....oh well we haven't had adventure for a while!" She opened it.

There's the Call to Adventure. Then there's Jumping at the Call. And then there's Visions from Another Eye.

"Ok girls, this may be rushed but i need to make do this spell with you guys!" said Twilight.

Always nice when the main character comments on the plot mechanics.

You seriously need to brush up on your English skills. And your plotting skills. That's all I can say.