• Member Since 27th Jul, 2015
  • offline last seen Jun 10th, 2018

Cringe Queen


Name was previously Randomepony2003

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Twilight, now princess, I bored so she cleans her library to find a note? She couldn't tell if it was good or bad, but it was from Celestia so it has to be good, right?

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Comments ( 8 )

Nice to see you've *ahem* improved your descriptions. :unsuresweetie:

A story af the main six being OOC?
Seems legit

"This is like that one time.....oh well we haven't had adventure for a while!" She opened it.

There's the Call to Adventure. Then there's Jumping at the Call. And then there's Visions from Another Eye.

"Ok girls, this may be rushed but i need to make do this spell with you guys!" said Twilight.

Always nice when the main character comments on the plot mechanics.

You seriously need to brush up on your English skills. And your plotting skills. That's all I can say.

6490011 I guess*shrug* I just try to think about the plot, no body got time for english XD

6489664 I guess, i let my characters break fourth wall some times, just for fun

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