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The Night's Justice

Set in an alternate version of Equestria, nocturnal ponies thrive under the light of the moon and celebrate their benevolent Queen Luna. But all that shines beneath the light is not peaceful, as Twilight Sparkle, inquisitive explorer extraordinaire and five unlikely companions, must overcome tragedy and find the secret of a power that has been lost to Equestria for centuries.

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#1 · Nov 18th, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Interesting take on things. Looks like Trixie ended up as the personal student of Luna.

The story has me wondering what will be happening in the future. Though, if you've killed off Lyra, this is about as far as I go.

JadeLightning

JadeLightning #2 · Nov 18th, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Killed off Lyra? Absolutely not! There's interesting things in store for her, don't worry!

saruSAM

saruSAM #3 · Nov 18th, 2011 · · · Chapter 1 ·

I'm not sure how I feel about it so far. Not thrilled by some of the character changes yet I am incredibly intrigued by them. Which is a sign of a good story when you hook a reader even when they aren't terribly interested in parts of. Well played.