Motivational Training

Rainbow Dash has always had problems with self-confidence even when her demeanor speaks another language. When her insecurities threaten to drag her down more than usual, a pony named Crescent Moon approaches her. Never did she imagine that a complete stranger could teach her a thing or two about her innermost feelings and maybe even fill a hole that she wasn't even aware was there.

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MistyDay

MistyDay #1 · Sep 14th, 2015 · · ·

Not one comment? OR VOTE? WHAT?! Fimfiction! COME ON! This is OUTRAGEOUS!

This is a good story! A few things to improve here and there, but meh! It's a good story nontheless! I read it in bed two days ago and thought it was a decent read. I wasn't logged in... I seldomly am... but If I had known that not ONE would vote or comment till now, I would have done so.

Alright.. enough ranting. for now... maybe.

As I said: it's a cute story and - even if english is not your native language - it's pretty good. I'm german as well, sooo yah. I know how difficult it can be to write stories in english. My worst enemy when writing a story is the story itself... not the language xD. My ideas are always waaaay too cheesy... or cliche... or both.... ooor just utter crap. That's probably also the reason why I have never published a story. xD Weeell, anyhoof. Keep up the great work! I definately enjoyed it! :)

Gnarrkhaz

Gnarrkhaz #2 · Sep 14th, 2015 · · ·

6421891 Danke! Schön, dass es dir gefallen hat.

The thing with the votes is a bit odd though. When i'm logged in i can see that the story has 5 upvotes and 1 downvote. However, when i'm logged out i don't see those votes. So far i haven't figured out why that is or how to fix it.

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