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staryoshi06

staryoshi06 #1 · Sep 30th, 2015 · · · chapter 1: that's new ·

What am I even looking at.

Edited by Syntavant

I'm pretty sure that's the only part that has actually been edited, the rest of the description is an extremely long run-on sentence.

frozen inferno

frozen inferno #2 · Oct 2nd, 2015 · · · chapter 1: that's new ·

6477173 do you have any feedback on the story or just the description

staryoshi06

staryoshi06 #3 · Oct 2nd, 2015 · · · chapter 1: that's new ·

6483787 I don't tend to actually read a story if I can tell it's going to be bad by the description.

Dragonborne Fox

Dragonborne Fox #4 · Oct 2nd, 2015 · · · chapter 1: that's new ·

6483787 If this were truly edited (for the sake of this argument), then why not have your editor edit the synopsis/description and chapter titles as well? Just my two cents.

frozen inferno

frozen inferno #5 · Oct 2nd, 2015 · · · chapter 1: that's new ·

Ok the description has been edited so no more issues and if anybody is gonna comment on it can you please read the story first that would be greatly appreciated thank you