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Two human siblings are sent to Equestria, but it's not all fun in games, or is it? When Cadmium Core learns about some sort of link between himself and Twilight, he will be more then just an unfortunate human. How would life be if you met your physical and mental opposite? I do not own anything, only Cadmium Core.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

Siblings, eh?

You've caught my interest. :trixieshiftright:

(Haven't actually read fic yet, doing that now.)

Ah, the classic big bro versus little sis setup. I think this deserves some attention.

Seems quite promising. Looking forward to reading more of it.

I gave you a thumbs up solely based on the fact that one of the ponies is facing to the right.

Edit:

After reading, I noticed several HIE cliches that i'm not fond of. 1. adult blank flank. 2. Head straight to the main six 3. Free lessons plus shelter

the pacing needs a lot of work. None of the details are dwelt on. It feels very rushed. Not to mention the "LOLZ, WE'RE PONIES NOW WHAT?" feel.


But still, the pony is facing to the right. good job on that one

Looks good, Im faving this until futher notice

Looks like he is able of magical support. This is interesting, i shall wait eagerly for the next chapter

...Mistakes were made. That is all... :ajbemused:

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