This story is a sequel to E.S.D.E: The Exam
After overcoming Nightmare (With the help of Pinkie Pie) who attacked them during the Exam. Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo were accepted into the Elemental School for the Defenders of Equestria.
Now that they begin their schooling what challenges await our heroes.
Please read the previous story, but you don't have too to understand this story.
update: this story is no longer the right sequel to the ESDE story and will be replaced with another Sequel instead. now the reason this one is being canceled is because it under went changes that might be kinda odd, as well as the fact it was edited four times and people got kind of confused.
Chapters (4)
Yeouch. lol That punch came out of no where. Sort of a shame things are going a bit quick, would be nice to see where and when some of these friendships. When did DT and SS start falling out or SS thinking DT was weak for wanting to befriend Sweetie Belle?
These two episodes you're writing, at least it feels like you're going for the episodic way of telling the story, just kinda wish the first one had more acts to better lead into this one.
Just curious if Silver is trying to be the alpha and Diamond just had to remind her she isn't one to be pushed around or what. Best of luck with the rest of the story. Sort of reminds me a bit of RUBY, the show. Just be nice to get more character exploration where possible.
Keep working hard.
6410064 funny you mention RWBY as it is where i got the inspiration, along with several other things, for this story.
as for the friendship between Diamond and Silver it will be explained later in this Episode as you called it. and as for the punch scene it was to show that Diamond Tiara is still Diamond Tiara even if she is trying to be nice and it is also to show that Diamond's bad habits rubbed off on Silver Spoon. BUT I have no Idea why I put it in this Chapter as it has nothing to do with this or the next chapter.
6410106 Yeah, story really felt like it drew from it. The best thing about RWBY for me was not so much the weapons and the fighting, but the character interactions. Taking time to introduce us to each member. Build on them. Have fun getting them to interact with others.
I'll look forward to the next chapter.
Which one of your stories is that one?
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Defenders of equestria is the current sequel chapter one is the first esde story Exam. I noticed i was moving to fast in this one so i decided to slow down a little.