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Mortomis Reaper


I just want to make stories for ponies to enjoy

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You come home after work at Sugarcube Corner to find an old stained letter on your desk. You take a seat and examine it to see that it is written in messy black ink and the strangest part is, it has no information of why it was sent to you or where it came from. There is no sender's name written on it, the letter simply starts with I...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

You come home after work at sugar cube corner

It should be capitalized, and the name is two words, not three: "Sugarcube Corner".

There is no senders name

Apostrophes are your friends.

6376809

I thank you for the heads up but you lost me on the second half

6376844
Do you know what an apostrophe is?

6376854

Yes I do but I do not understand what you are trying to say, could you please elaborate more

6376809

oh wait I just understood

6376809

Also may I ask you a question ?

6376882

On the cover page how many words long does it say the story is?

6376944

I wanted to make sure the completely revised version of this story went up instead of the original, I wondered because the chapter said 1233, but the total word count said 1085, I just unpublished the chapter and republished it and the total reset

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