When Rainbow Dash accidentally drink the Love Poison Potion that the CMC left after use it but what happen if Rainbow Dash drink it when she with Applejack?
Well I hope you enjoy the story I work faster ha ha... Anyway anyone have a problem with my grammar or spelling, I use program to repair any grammar and spelling problem so you so not have problem to understand the fanfic but if you still have a problem you seriously have a problem to read.
This fic need a cover images have one? Let me know if the rating, the category and the characters man cast are wrong.
Chapters (2)
Well this one was a little weird.......then again its random so i don't really mind.........I guess the only problem i had (besides some grammer and spelling issues) The cure shouldve been consistent to the show (Keep Rainbow away from Applejack for 1 hour)
It felt a little rushed so i shall remain neutral on this story. (PM me if you want a proof-reader
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656583 Read the description of the fic before speak about my grammar.
Is a alternative way to cure the love poison potion effect.
And not thanks I not need a proofreader.
Felix I appreciate your work and I did read the description. I also do understand though. Everybody starts somewhere. In fact, I started just where you did 3 months ago and I feel I've made major improvement and I wish you the best! Perfect practice make perfect
AuditumMannis
So...you deleted my, and most other comments politely advising you to seek proof reading? You'll have a hard time improving with that attitude. I wish you the best.
662973 Because I said it I not need a proofreader you people keep saying the same think I not want spam comments, so who need improving the attitude is all those who not stop speak about grammar so I wish you the best too to you.
Wow, that plot. So enticing.
What does the last paragraph mean? Also, I think you got persecution wrong, look it up.
Oh man, this was beautiful.
So beautiful my feet fell off, seriously dude, this was so majestical, there's no way I could ever write anything close to as good as this.
You and your fics are clearly perfection, and I am unworthy to be anywhere near you, forgive me, for I am a sinner when bathed in your glorious light of truth and amazingness.
10/10 so amazing
HELP ME
OH GOD IT HURTS
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LAWL, you delete comments about people trying to help you, and get mad when they ask you why you aren't taking their advice. You must be pretty stupid.
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Lol helping me yeah right I will know who helping me and who not, and these I deleted are not helping. Wow call me stupid was so immature of you
What ironic of you 
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I don't even think I can warrant a response to this shlock you call grammar. No offense, man, but you need a proofreader. And you need one bad. But, I am fairly sure you are not even real, because no one can have this bad of grammar.
IS THIS REAL LIFE?
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no
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And you need a proof-educator to teach how to act political and you need one bad right now. You sire are a bad person who treat other people like shit.
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What? No, like, literally, why do I need to act political? In fact, how do I act political? Political isn't an action.
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This got super rapey.