I come from Nova Scotia, I write fanfiction and clop fic as well. I hope you enjoy both.
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Take my like fool.
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Almost every sentence has a grammar problem. The sentences themselves are pretty mangled too; it's a struggle to reform them in my head into viable English sentences. The concept itself is good, though the progression from Glistening Melon seeing all bat ponies as fearful, savage, sub-pony monsters and him respecting and wanting to mate with Shade is very jumpy and far too quick. There should be a better initial connection that acts as a bridge for him to get over his prejudices as he spends time with her. As it stands, this story is in dire need of a good editor and the author needs some practice writing stories.
I struggle to read this!
while I don't notice or care about grammar issues, this guy 6397272 is right. A lot of writers get shit on because of there grammar. That's from my experience anyways, so to a writer to a another. Here, use this link, there's plenty of people who are willing to help new writers settle in.
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
I'm liking the story so far......but you definitely need a proofreader......... and an editor
Following. Shower sex is best sex and qt batponies are awesome.
I don't want to see more of this....... I NEED TO SEE MOAR!!!!!!# Your doing a fantastic job with this story. It has more than enough to keep me interested. Keep it up and I look forward to the next chapter. Huh I must have read to much on fimfiction never even noticed the Grammer or punctuation issues. Oh well great read non the less.
Duly noted are your comments, I am writing the second part, but the release is going to take some time due to my busy life. I am working on it, but don't except it this week. Next week more then likely the next chapter will be out. Hope you are all still around for the next and last part.
Also I am going to release another story. Yes it will have a bat pony. I am currently editing it as to make it be fit to bring to the site. I'm sure some all will be like , Making me go . Anyways, peace!
Several grammatical errors, but very enjoyable nonetheless. I look forward to more.
Genius, love it mate, love stories like this.
More please