I really like this story so far but one thing I noticed was that in it it say a emp wave and I was wondering if you knew that emp stands for a electromagnetic pulse the proper phrase would be emw(wave instead of pulse) if you read this, thank you and have a nice day Ps I'm sorry if this sounds rude
Reading the conversation between Drake and Tonoe, it was like someone wrote down the incoherent babbles of 12 year olds. You had no idea what anyone was talking about or what anything had to do with anything.
Interesting. I really like the showdown between Lightning Master and Purgatory. This chapter is well written and now on to Chapter 2!
Some one is gonna wake up with the worst headache.
I really like this story so far but one thing I noticed was that in it it say a emp wave and I was wondering if you knew that emp stands for a electromagnetic pulse the proper phrase would be emw(wave instead of pulse) if you read this, thank you and have a nice day
Ps I'm sorry if this sounds rude
Kind of clichéd, but it has managed to grab my attention.
Word of advice.
GET A PROOF READER AND FIX THE SPELLING ERROR'S HERE
btw. its called a test of strength. not a struggle of strength.
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I can’t read this because of that. It’s too jumbled and the sentences are confusing.
Boops da snoots.
Reading the conversation between Drake and Tonoe, it was like someone wrote down the incoherent babbles of 12 year olds. You had no idea what anyone was talking about or what anything had to do with anything.
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I mean yeah but that’s kinda rude