Reader, Writer and Timewaster......
Recently been kicked out of the Wonderbolt Academy on grounds for endangering lives. Lightning Dust now hits rock bottom of her life, hard.
Attempting to nurse the pain and humiliation of her actions, Lightning resorts to a dive bar to console herself. There she is gifted a second chance.
However it is up to her whether or not she chooses it.
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That was pretty good. A few minor technical errors, but great imagery and enough mystery that I want to read the next chapter now.
The world needs more Lightning Dust art.
6455781 Thank-You for reading and enjoying!!! If you do spot any errors just shout it out to me and I'll try to change them!
6455852 I'm really really really seriously bad at drawing and artwork...
6456585 Ah, well it was mostly just lamenting how often that one is used for a cover art. Especially since this story feels like could use a more fitting badass Lightning.
Far as the story goes? Yeah, Fire can get pissed all he wants. Spitfire only served to encourage LD to push harder and praised her ingenuity and creativity. And RD, Captain of a bloody Weather Team who knows the dangers of messing with tornadoes is 100% just as responsible for not speaking up sooner. LD is faster, more agile, but likely not as strong as RD. Hard to say but RD certainly had the stamina at the very least to continue a bit longer in the tornado.
I like that LD still has her spunk in this one. Well, here's hoping LD can find a nice way to throw something back in Spitfire's face some. And show that backstabbing Rainbow Dash who threw all the blame on her for something that no pony could have predicted. Seriously, if Fire got that upset over LD making fun of Spitfire's name then he'd be trying to outright kill if he heard what I thought of her. xD
Fun story so far. I'll chalk up Wind being faster then Lightning due to her being out of shape/not 100% sober. Looking forward to more. ;3
6456788 Yeah, I know that the artwork currently is super generic but it was the best I could come up with. If I find another that suits the story better I'll probably change it.
Thanks for taking a liking to the story and LD! I'm probably going to have go back and watch the Wonderbolt Academy episode again, but thanks for pointing out LD/RD/SF points out to me!
6456885 Cheers for pointing this out to me, I always appreciate constructive criticism! Yeah, rereading these quotes I realise that some bits could be cut down slightly. If I make any others next time just let me know!
6519995 Hi, yeah sure! I'm always looking for new opinions and ways to improve!