Honestly, you could of left Hellfire unchanged. With the full religious overtones and everything. Besides, it would of been interesting seeing a dragon singing part of Ave Maria. It would also show just how old he actually is to AJ.
6410468 True. At the time I was trying to keep religion out of the story so as to not offend people's religious views. I do see your point though. I might change the lyrics back but for now I'm going to leave them as is.
6410936 Here's another thing to think about. In the original lyrics frolo is singing about his desire for Esmeralda to be his. Draigo just wants to burn the gypsy, not make her his woman.
6410961 Yes, beware the royal rant! It'll be a little while until I get the next chapter ready though.
Honestly, you could of left Hellfire unchanged. With the full religious overtones and everything. Besides, it would of been interesting seeing a dragon singing part of Ave Maria. It would also show just how old he actually is to AJ.
6410468 True. At the time I was trying to keep religion out of the story so as to not offend people's religious views. I do see your point though. I might change the lyrics back but for now I'm going to leave them as is.
6410864 Either or is fine by me, it's your story after all. Then again, I am a self proclaimed Buddhist.
oh no! royal rant incoming! take cover!
more please!
6410936 Here's another thing to think about. In the original lyrics frolo is singing about his desire for Esmeralda to be his. Draigo just wants to burn the gypsy, not make her his woman.
6410961 Yes, beware the royal rant! It'll be a little while until I get the next chapter ready though.
Draigo doesn't seem hesitant enough when near the end. Try adding pauses(like '...') and sighs.
6929219 I believe I've fixed what you've pointed out.
DAMN YOU WRITER! Now I must watch The Hunchback of Notre Dame!... Again... For the 5th time today.
I would be that guys that when celestia sead to go with her i'd say no XD
Primordial dragon getting lectured by a fucking pony. Glorious