6381568 As of right now Draigo has two forms that I'll be using, a human form and his Draconic form. I might add more but they would most likely be one use forms. He does have "shapeshifting" as a power but I felt that if I actually used all his powers as efficiently as possible that he'd just be a Gary-Stu. I don't want that.
This isn't a specific crossover. I created Draigo. I did take his name from Warhammer 40k but that's all. Everything else about him, besides his power list which I've changed, was created by me.
If you have more questions I'd be willing to answer them.
6381604 What sort of limitations did you place on him? Besides the obvious ones mentioned in the story. I ask because I want to compare to a character I may actually publish.
6381618 I'm trying to keep his elemental manipulation fairly simplistic, though still being able to manipulate all the elements, since the list of things he'd be able to do, like all the stuff Toff does in "Avatar: The Last Airbender", would be gigantic and would be "Gary-Stu" inducing. His immortality is still there though his body can be destroyed. He'll regenerate his body fully after 24 hours but can regain his human or smaller draconic form after an hour. He can grow from his usual full-size, but I'm only going to do that if he crosses over with a universe that has bigger dragons than he is or something that warrants a bigger size to fight. The Elements of Harmony will work on him if he turned evil or got possessed or something. The Princesses working together would give him a run for his money, not counting Cadence or the future Twilicorn. He's treated like a god by the dragons, but he's cut himself off from leadership since the dragons wouldn't be able to resist any order given to them due to his "Dragon Manipulation". Since he's been alive since time began his magic resereves are astronomical but not endless.
These are the limitations I've given him so far. I don't think I'll be adding much more than that but I might to make it easier to give him opponents to fight.
I'm still fleshing him out fully and really appreciate questions like this. They really make me think and decide what I'm going to do with him.
6381702 Happy to help! Why not make up a reason for his magical reserves to begin being depleted by something? Like a negative/dark/evil version of him trying to take his powers to take over the world or something equally as hammy. You can build it up slowly over several chapters too, like he just notices he is losing a tiny bit more than normal of his mana each time he uses it, until eventually his mana begins slipping away in large amounts. Give him something to fight against.
6381756 Hmm, that sounds like a good idea. Hmm, yes. Okay, time to start creating his opponent. I've been meaning to rewrite the fourth chapter anyway. Thanks! I really do appreaciate it. If you ever need help with something just let me know.
Draigo could make out the words 'Dragon, dragon. Rock the dragon. Dragonball Z.'
Those words stirred something inside of him. They seemed so familiar yet he couldn't recall where or when he'd heard them. It would come back to him sometime, hopefully.
" Pinkie said as she hopped in circles then left just as she came, singing a different song. Draigo could make out the words 'Dragon, dragon. Rock the dragon. Dragonball Z.'
God dammit you just had to do that refrence did you?
a nice chapter! more please!
This seems interesting. Any way, how many forms does Draigo have? Also, is this some specific crossover, or is it a created character?
6381568 As of right now Draigo has two forms that I'll be using, a human form and his Draconic form. I might add more but they would most likely be one use forms. He does have "shapeshifting" as a power but I felt that if I actually used all his powers as efficiently as possible that he'd just be a Gary-Stu. I don't want that.
This isn't a specific crossover. I created Draigo. I did take his name from Warhammer 40k but that's all. Everything else about him, besides his power list which I've changed, was created by me.
If you have more questions I'd be willing to answer them.
6381604 What sort of limitations did you place on him? Besides the obvious ones mentioned in the story. I ask because I want to compare to a character I may actually publish.
6381618 I'm trying to keep his elemental manipulation fairly simplistic, though still being able to manipulate all the elements, since the list of things he'd be able to do, like all the stuff Toff does in "Avatar: The Last Airbender", would be gigantic and would be "Gary-Stu" inducing. His immortality is still there though his body can be destroyed. He'll regenerate his body fully after 24 hours but can regain his human or smaller draconic form after an hour. He can grow from his usual full-size, but I'm only going to do that if he crosses over with a universe that has bigger dragons than he is or something that warrants a bigger size to fight. The Elements of Harmony will work on him if he turned evil or got possessed or something. The Princesses working together would give him a run for his money, not counting Cadence or the future Twilicorn. He's treated like a god by the dragons, but he's cut himself off from leadership since the dragons wouldn't be able to resist any order given to them due to his "Dragon Manipulation". Since he's been alive since time began his magic resereves are astronomical but not endless.
These are the limitations I've given him so far. I don't think I'll be adding much more than that but I might to make it easier to give him opponents to fight.
I'm still fleshing him out fully and really appreciate questions like this. They really make me think and decide what I'm going to do with him.
6381702 Happy to help! Why not make up a reason for his magical reserves to begin being depleted by something? Like a negative/dark/evil version of him trying to take his powers to take over the world or something equally as hammy. You can build it up slowly over several chapters too, like he just notices he is losing a tiny bit more than normal of his mana each time he uses it, until eventually his mana begins slipping away in large amounts. Give him something to fight against.
6381756 Hmm, that sounds like a good idea. Hmm, yes. Okay, time to start creating his opponent. I've been meaning to rewrite the fourth chapter anyway. Thanks! I really do appreaciate it. If you ever need help with something just let me know.
Fuckin' A, Pinkie.
God dammit you just had to do that refrence did you?
The Dragon is a displaced isnt he?
7093576 He made a token in an earlier chapter. He's having human-ish flashbacks/memories. It's kinda obvious by now.