*raises a glass* Wouldn't expect anything less.

Oh god that picture of her at the start

Well, umm... what about the manager?

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Still bleeding on the floor just outside. Yes, that oversight was intentional.
COMEDY! :D

919180 Well... looks like he'll have to clean those fluids too.

Here is the ending we all expected.

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so this is who Crowley is? I clap for you sir.

919238 Amen, though part of me thought it was unnecessary. I don't listen to that part too often though...

I can just imagine the OC "You" shouting "Hey. Stop bleeding on my floor." at the manager when you wake up the next morning.

But aside from that little thought, bravo, Crowley! This is just.... infinitely fascinating! You, sir, have fingers blessed by God. And I eagerly anticipate that Pinkie fic you mentioned in your blog post!

All the best,
~S.W.

Excellent! We need more on this site.

Yay! Sexy time for Trixie! I am pleased now Mr. Crowley. I eagerly await your next work.

Another great work by my #1 fetish provider

Sucks about EqD, but hey, it means we get sexy trixie times :D

Just the fact that Trixie is in this made me not want to read it.
But when I gave in, leave it to Crowley to actually make me enjoy a Trixie story.
Damn you, in the best way possible, that is.

Perfect ending to yet another perfect story. I applaud you good sir and keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next story!

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Hey, it's just one more way of making myself recognisable. And now you've found me as a result, so woo hoo!

I really like these stories of yours. The only thing I don't get is why it isn't in third person. It seems odd to read a story that tells me what I'm doing, saying, and feeling, not to mention giving me a back story. Obviously none of those things are likely to match the audience(at least not me) so why not just make it third person and give the character a name?

STOP PUTTING SPOILERS AT THE END OF YOUR STORIES!!!

Put them at the beginning

Hot damn...oh the arousing opening sentences~~~SHIT!!! A BONER!!! ARGH!!!

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Because too many readers would see the main named character as a self-insert, especially if they had a name. Keeping said character as "you", regardless of whether you would do what they do in the story, changes the ideal of it.
Let's put it this way: would you rather view a roller coaster ride through the perspective of someone riding it (even if that someone isn't really you), or would you rather watch the roller coaster itself? Sometimes it's more fun to witness it from the eyes of the rider, if that makes sense.

919154 *Rises glass and taps yours* I agree my good man.
To the Arthur: Not enough detail.....But wonderful none the less.

I love you..

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I can see your point. It's just a matter of personal taste I guess. I remember reading "Spreading your wings and hers" and when it mentions "you" having a white coat im just thinking 'nananana, cant hear you! My self insert pony's coat is not white!' lol

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Uh... what?
None of my "you" characters have any colour specifications... mostly it's just pony-race and that's it... I've double checked the fic to make sure, there's no mention of "you" having a white coat in it. Rainbow Dash says "Talk about white-wash of the week", but that's because he lost every game they played that week. No actual description there, dude.
EG: "Dude, they beat us in soccer 5 - 0! We were white-washed!" Or think of Pinkie beat Rarity at tic-tac-toe 35 games in a row. That's considered a "white-wash".
Now that I think about it, Whitewash might actually be British slang and not American... if it is, I'm sorry, I had no idea!

Ahh there it is. Good ol clop time with Mr Crowley.

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Ha an apology is in order!
I was reading a story called Turbulence between reading your stories and it's in that one that the main character's color is briefly stated during a scene with a rainbow waterfall.

Once again Crowley, your stories continue to amaze me! Keep up the great work!

My... My fetishes got a level up?! SCORE! 8D
/bricked

Now this feels like a Crowley story, I was worried when I first read it.

919180 *meanwhile, outside* oh god my head, why won't anyone help me. OMG what are they doing in there, *beating at door* why won't you help me *crying* oh god the blood is everywhere *falls unconscious in large pool of blood*

Oh and for making it mature now:

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Yet another well put together fic.

Saw the Houdini-esque ending from the start. as Im sure everyone else did.

Still a very good fiction, this has to be one of my favorite second-person persona's you've created.

Now that it's finally complete, I can say that this was up to the standards I expect out of the second-person master. So EQD shot you down or'd you just just get tired of waiting?

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Long story short, it didn't even make it to pre-readers. There's apparently another set of pre-pre-readers that wouldn't let it past due to 2nd-person, and I'd have to make the fic completely immaculate just to get past them, which wouldn't be worth it if I was just gonna get shot by the actual pre-readers for having it in 2nd person right after.
Might try again with a 3rd person fic in the distant future.

"with a flick of your mind, your horn’s aura reaches out and tightly wraps around your tip, sealing off your climax in its tracks as Trixie gets closer and closer to her breaking point."

"Her own hoof wearily grips you by the shaft, giving you the signal to dispel your aura. The pressure returns almost immediately, a lone drop of your produce trickling down from your tip."

"In that moment, you release, shivering from the relief of each liberating spurt."

So, I don't really get what happens here. it seems to me that he came, but then... didn't? I get that he used his magic to 'pinch off' the flow, but... Once you reach climax, you can't really just... stop it. So, the moment he released his magical grip, all of the fluids that would've built up would just come flowing out at once.

Though, I guess I haven't really tried to just like... stop it, so...

I suppose my question here is, am I misunderstanding what you wrote? or is there like, some sort of tactic that I've overlooked as a man?

if it's the latter, I don't need personal intimate details, or anything... Not trying to be a creeper, I'm just a little confused.

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It's better understood that he was sealing off the climax itself, not the flow of it. It's possible to do if you have enough self control, but it kinda hurts so I wouldn't recommend trying it. The magic was mostly just to show what he was doing more clearly,

yep an epic story crowley i like these longer storys you've been doing, awesome

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Okay, okay, put your claws away man.

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It's okay man, I just don't want any friction that might spark negativity, you know? But thanks; I know you were just trying to stand up for me in the face of (slightly) negative feedback. It's in the past now. S'cool.

959394 Grammer nazi's are a writers best friend, I WISH I had some in my fan fics comment section. Anywhere else on the internet aside from fan fiction sites they are annoying, but not here.

Some interesting stuff as always

I just got to chapter two.... and I already exploded.

I don't even like Trixie. Excuse me, didn't even like Trixie.

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Either did I at first, honestly, but the "underwater escape tank" was too good of a fic scenario to pass up, and I naturally needed a magician/showgirl like Trixie! By the time I was done with the fic, you could certainly say I had different opinions towards her than when I started.

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(Just in case nobody's done it already)

1312842 I think it's a publicity stunt and she tries to make herself more epic and therefore attract attention to her performance. She never speaks to someone close to her.

Great story Crowley! Have a picture to show some love.

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It's just what I always wanted

1545989 still awesome and i the only one to catch this?

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Lots of people notice, and even look for, crossovers within my stories. The most notable ones are Rarity's friend getting mugged by Trixie's future friend (as you've seen), Fluttershy's friend and Ditzy's friend being roommates and Rainbow Dash's problems (in her sequel fic) happening around the same time as Applejack's fic. There's a lot of others, but you'll have to find them yourself!

1546058 thank you for the heads up