Chapter 1
3 Equestrian Sisters
By Razbow shine~
The dark blue mare soared across the night sky, gazing upon her sleeping subjects houses. She looked up to her beautiful moon wondering if anyone cherishes her night sky at she landed near her sisters student’s library. She was here to ask about the strange occurrences around Ponyville, ponies going missing from Ponyville and being found around the outskirts of the Canterlot Gardens. It was bothering her, Why the Canterlot Gardens? Why Ponyville? She knocked slowly but formally on the young unicorn’s door, hoping it was not too late of a time at night and she would be disturbing her sleep.
~~~~~~~~~~~…~~~~~~~~~~~
‘Coming…’ Said a tired voice from the dragon, Spike.
He opened the door and to his surprise stood the night princess before him staring questionably at his pink, frilly eye mask.
‘I-I’ll get Twilight for you, your majesty.’ Spike said worried that the princess saw his mask.
Luna nodded gratefully and looked past Spike and into the room behind him.
‘Was thou master staying up to study?’ Asked the princess.
‘Y-Yes Your highness’
‘Did someone say highness?! Is princess Celestia here?' Questioned the unicorn, seemingly appearing out of nowhere.
‘Sorry to disappoint thou if you were waiting for the presence of thee sister, I am here on royal duty to ask about the strange happening around Ponyville in the last couple of weeks’ Said the princess now turning to Twilight.
‘Spike please leave me and Luna alone to speak this is important, not stuff for baby dragons’
‘Alright…’
‘Luna, I know why the people are going missing’
‘Yes?’
‘Celestia gave permission for Pinkie to banish everyone to the moon as a joke, but Pinkie for once took this seriously. She came here at a similar time of night to persuade me to turn her into an alicorn, I thought she wanted to feel what it was like to be a unicorn so I gave her a unicorn horn able to teleport ponies. She thinks she’s teleporting them to the moon but she can’t get further than the gardens.’
‘May thou ask how the horn has lasted this long?’
‘My spell it, kind of, back fired…’
‘So what will happen to thou subject?’
‘Um...’
‘Twilight tell us’
‘She will slowly but eventually become an alicorn’.
~~~’***’~~~
The princess thought over what Twilight had just told her, it was impossible for her friend to become an alicorn like her sister and herself. Sure she had heard of unicorns becoming alicorns for spilt seconds at birth, but this was a full grown earth pony! Even with the spell influencing her change it still shouldn’t happen. This problem troubled her deeply, she would ask her sister if this was technically possible. It wasn’t that she did believe Twilight Sparkle was right, she was just worried for what could happen to Equestia if the pink pony became an alicorn.
~~~’…’~~~
Celestia squirmed around in her chair, wondering where her sister was at this time of night. Originally she thought that her sister was fixing a bit of her night sky, she was genuinely obsessive of the position of the stars. She looked up with a start feeling her sisters presence in her room, she quicky flew over to her room and flew open her door using her power to find that no one was in there.
‘That’s strange…’ She said to herself, momentarily forgetting about her secret library.
‘Gotcha!’
She mused to herself that she forgot about her library, of cause she would be in there, in her library there was books that had never been seen to mortal eye! Books about the history of all Equestia! She would be looking at why these ponies were going missing. She pressed down on her wall with her hoof revealing a large section of the castle which ponies think is the royal ballroom.
‘Luna, where are you?’ Celestia called.
‘Over here sister’
Celestia trotted over to where her sister was sitting. She caught a glimpse of the book she was reading before her sister put it away.
‘Earth ponies as alicorns?’ Celestia questioned.
‘The pink party pony may fall to this fate’ Luna said sadly.
‘But, that hasn’t happened since Discord!’
‘Yes, but it is possible for a powerful unicorn’s spell to back fire, correct?’ Replied Luna calmly.
‘Are you saying Twili-‘
‘Yes, your dear student Twilight Sparkle has most likely doomed us all.’
~…~
Pinkie Pie trotted along the streets happily with her new horn. She felt wondrous! She looked around for ponies disobeying her rule. Smile every minute of the day or you get sent to the moon. She looked at a particular orange pony, noticing her frown.
'Hey Apple Jack!' She said in her usual cheerful tone.
‘Hey Pinkie, how yer’ going’ Apple jack replied
‘Oh good, quite good in fact, but I think you need to feel a bit better!’ She said her voice now dropping to a lower frightening tone.
‘And I know JUST how to do that!’ She said suddenly sounding happy. With a bright light Apple jack was teleported to the Canterlot Gardens where Pinkie would go later to check on all of her frowning subjects.
~.~
Apple Jack felt the world whirling around her; she immediately knew she was being teleported. But this felt farther than when Twilight teleported them, and instead of seeing purple she saw pink. A pink the same color of Pinkie’s mane, could be a coincidence she thought, or maybe, just maybe Pinkie teleported her. She thought she saw a horn on Pinkie’s head but Apple Jack thought she was dreaming. Maybe Pinkies finally gone crazy and yelled at Twilight she thought to herself. Maybe. Suddenly she could see again, she looked around to see that she was no longer in Ponyville and all around her was sad looking ponies. Big ones, small ones, stallions and mares, all looking more miserable than the last. Behind her a bright pink flash came out of nowhere startling her.
‘Well hello, subjects.’
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I know its short but if you guys like it ill make it longer
Ha.... aha..... HA. Twilight effed that one up.
I would frown in sight of a Alicorn Pinkie Pie, just out of sheer horror.
The horror of the Pink menace has begun.
Also some grammatical horrors too.
Look at me, now back to Pinkie, Pinkie is now cupcakes. Look at me, now back to Pinkie. Pinkie is now Rarity. Look at me, now back to RariPinkThing, She is now diamond-encrusted balloons. Look at me, now back to the balloons, They are now an Alicorn. Anything is possible when your stallion smells like Old Spice and not a mare.
This story is rather interesting, I would hate for you to discontinue. I would love to see the next chapter soon. ^^
651978
I couldn't have put it better myself.
652102 thank you :3
652102 thank you :3 651978 Well this is the FIRST story I have ever published. Ever.
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651910 (I know the cover image kinda says pinkie will be an alicorn but maybe she won't
652651
Don't sweat it. I'm full of errors too and I only have two stories. (neither are complete) Dig the avatar BTW.
The question is 651910 652131 652036 651978 would you read moar
Also just tell me my mistakes I don't mind negative stuff
652699 Does a bear crap in the woods? And does the pope help pedophiles get away with their crimes?
I also noticed that that Equestrian is spelled Equestian in the title. Just saying.
There is a lot to read on this site. That said I like to support other's endeavors, especially as I have become inturested in writing in the past few years. I'm more of a sci fi guy. Long story short, sure I may read more from you, but the important thing is to have fun yourself. I'm writing right now so I don't have time to include all errors, but here is one. Replace was with were.
she looked around to see that she was no longer in Ponyville and all around her were sad looking ponies.
652737 correct me if I'm wrong but isn't 'was' past tense? (I may of forgot which tense I'm writing in but I think I tried to keep in present and again correct me if I'm wrong)
652801
Now you have me thinking.
I think it just sounds weird, because looked is past tense. If I think about a sentence like this... She looked around her and was surrounded by sad ponies. (past tense)
Was and were are both past progressive tense. Past progressive tense describes a past action which was happening when another action occurred. This tense is formed by using was/were with the verb form ending in -ing.
Present progressive tense describes an ongoing action that is happening at the same time the statement is written. This tense is formed by using am/is/are with the verb form ending in -ing
So I don't know.
Darn, I had the same idea! Looks like I'll have to add a different backstory to the creation of Princess Pinkie Pie.
652699 PSHHHHH Why not.
653449 Hur Hur
great Minds Think alike yes?
652729 Word stuffed up
655184
Indeed they do, my good man. (But first I've got to finish the Twipie romance/comedy story I'm writing then Chapter 3 of The Stuff That Dreams Are Made of and then I'll do Alicorn Pie.)
Dear god and Black Jesus.
We're doomed.