A pink pony longs to make everyone smile when a princess gives her the power to she gets out of hand. Who can stop this pink maddness before its too late?
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Razbowshine
Okai love writing just like soo much an- heck who cares? Ponys are my life :3
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I know its short but if you guys like it ill make it longer
Ha.... aha..... HA. Twilight effed that one up.
I would frown in sight of a Alicorn Pinkie Pie, just out of sheer horror.
The horror of the Pink menace has begun.
Also some grammatical horrors too.
Look at me, now back to Pinkie, Pinkie is now cupcakes. Look at me, now back to Pinkie. Pinkie is now Rarity. Look at me, now back to RariPinkThing, She is now diamond-encrusted balloons. Look at me, now back to the balloons, They are now an Alicorn. Anything is possible when your stallion smells like Old Spice and not a mare.
This story is rather interesting, I would hate for you to discontinue. I would love to see the next chapter soon. ^^
651978
I couldn't have put it better myself.
652102 thank you :3
652102 thank you :3 651978 Well this is the FIRST story I have ever published. Ever.
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651910 (I know the cover image kinda says pinkie will be an alicorn but maybe she won't
652651
Don't sweat it. I'm full of errors too and I only have two stories. (neither are complete) Dig the avatar BTW.
The question is 651910 652131 652036 651978 would you read moar
Also just tell me my mistakes I don't mind negative stuff
652699 Does a bear crap in the woods? And does the pope help pedophiles get away with their crimes?
I also noticed that that Equestrian is spelled Equestian in the title. Just saying.
There is a lot to read on this site. That said I like to support other's endeavors, especially as I have become inturested in writing in the past few years. I'm more of a sci fi guy. Long story short, sure I may read more from you, but the important thing is to have fun yourself. I'm writing right now so I don't have time to include all errors, but here is one. Replace was with were.
she looked around to see that she was no longer in Ponyville and all around her were sad looking ponies.
652737 correct me if I'm wrong but isn't 'was' past tense? (I may of forgot which tense I'm writing in but I think I tried to keep in present and again correct me if I'm wrong)
652801
Now you have me thinking.
I think it just sounds weird, because looked is past tense. If I think about a sentence like this... She looked around her and was surrounded by sad ponies. (past tense)
Was and were are both past progressive tense. Past progressive tense describes a past action which was happening when another action occurred. This tense is formed by using was/were with the verb form ending in -ing.
Present progressive tense describes an ongoing action that is happening at the same time the statement is written. This tense is formed by using am/is/are with the verb form ending in -ing
So I don't know.
Darn, I had the same idea! Looks like I'll have to add a different backstory to the creation of Princess Pinkie Pie.
652699 PSHHHHH Why not.
653449 Hur Hur
great Minds Think alike yes?
652729 Word stuffed up
655184
Indeed they do, my good man. (But first I've got to finish the Twipie romance/comedy story I'm writing then Chapter 3 of The Stuff That Dreams Are Made of and then I'll do Alicorn Pie.)
Dear god and Black Jesus.
We're doomed.