Cheerilee didn't know when her life began to take a turn for the strange.
Actually, once she thought about it, she realized it had begun about two and a half years before, when she met a strange girl sleeping in the library. From there her life has been like something out of one of those ani-mees that she keeps hearing about.
She just wanted a normal life, but with a magical teenager in her house and friends that just won't leave her alone, that seems like a long shot.
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I really like this! Can't wait for more
6319369 Thank you for the comment :D More should be out soon!
This is looking sweet, so far.
I like it so far!
If a teacher were that nice here, they'd be fired on the spot.
Teachers aren't aloud to drive students places from school at all. I know several teachers who have kids in the school they work for, and they aren't even aloud to drive their own kids home. Paranoia and pedos screw things up for everybody I guess.
6328490 Really? I've had several teachers drive me and my friends home, and know quite a few families where the parents work at the school and drive the kids home :O Maybe it's a regional/state/country thing? Or maybe some teachers just don't give a pony's flank xD
I am enjoying this quite a bit. Cheerilee's headache hits a little close to home for me, not that I've had them, but my mom did have a yearlong headache that she had to have surgery to get rid of not to long ago.
Um...how is talking to a sister who's only solution is a stiff drink any help?
6333641 Whoop, should have clarified more: Berry is the drunk one, Shine is the sensible one! I'll go add that in somewhere.
hmmm, interesting so far, I'm a bit surprised Sunset isn't acting like the well Alpha Bitch she's know for in Equestria Girls, but going by the Fall Formal pictures she actually didn't start out all bad and given her behavior here it's likely she's still new to this world...I'm guessing.
I admit I'm curious to see how they handle the whole, where does Sunset live thing, something I wish they'd address in the movies but maybe we'll get that this time around, who knows.
Going the Cheerilee is an interesting direction to go and I like that Cheerilee actually has to confind in another person since she isn't the confident type like Celestia is, which fits with her character.
Overall pretty good premise and I would like to see more.
That's a really interesting interpretation of Nightmare Moon in this world! It makes sense.
Hmm, Cheerilee's in quite a pickle now. There's no clear path to take, and all of them have serious repercussions for Sunset, Cheerilee, or both. It will be very interesting to see how she tackles the issue.
And how will Sunset evolve into what we saw later? This is shaping to be a good character study!
They're both starting to open up to each-other, which is healthy for both of them. If only they weren't so confusingly bound up in legalities and such. And adoption once again is brought up, as well as the origin of her jacket (imagining a young Sunset trying on a slightly-too-big jacket is really adorable!). Now, to wait and see what happens next...
And with that, their path is set- no more hesitation and uncertainty, only action and time. Hopefully, things will pull through for both of them.
amazing story so far keep up the good work
I love this story dude. It's great! I really like Sunset in this story and Cherilee keep it up dude!
Darn it, I found an up vote and a like. I think I'll just leave them here...