~warning- story contains profanity~
The sex tag is for the many, many sex jokes that will be made.
Arthor finds himself in a humanized version of Equestria. Waking up in Applejacks orchard... maybe not the best thing, but thanks to his Conduit powers, he should be just fine.
All thanks to +DISCORD+
First person crossover with inFAMOUS: Second Son (good ending) Props if you notice the Dark Souls reference in the character's name and powers.
Please thank Hoshikazu Starbright(this idiots sister) for being his personal editor. I'm an amateur, so it's not perfect >.< My brother cannot brain today. batman.exe has stoppppped working ....
Chapters (1)
Greetings, first customer/reviewer, I require opinions on which to feed.
6311426 Seems a bit rushed in some places, and changes scenes way too quickly. Seems that 1 second Arthor had a gun to his head, the next, he is in the house. Where is the transition? Other than that, pretty good story. Slow down the pacing a tad though.
cool story, but I must agree with Azrephel with that, it look a bit rush and everything was like a blur in a way, like one minute he's about to exit Curdan Cay, the next he's in Sweet Apple Acre, getting his ass kick, then once more capture, in my opinion, maybe add a short chase scene with Arthor and AJ, Bic Mac and Applebloom or just AJ, but other then being rush, it's a pretty cool first chapter, hope to see more in the near future my friend.
6311526 thanks, kinda new to this
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