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Poia


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An unknown pony trains several others to be unstoppable marauders. He drops them around the world of Equestria in his own twisted game. The only goal; to kill the others. The last one alive earns a reward of countless wealth. To make it more interesting, each pony has had their memory wiped. Who will be the last one standing?

WARNING:
Sexual humor/suggestion
Mild gore

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

6293700
Thanks. I can't either :P

6299592
Thanks for the suggestion, I'll be sure to put a gore warning at the top of appropriate chapters.

6299604
Yeah, I figured that would be said pretty soon, and I was kinda feeling it too, truth be told, I don't have much experience with relationships, and it's always been something I've struggled with in my stories...

6306684
I don't think your comment was rude at all, you gave me good criticism and are legitimately trying to help me, so really all I can say is thanks and that I will keep in mind what you've said, thought your hint at the begging was way too subtle, like, I don't see where at all you were going with that. (sarcasm, obviously) If you were referring to the lingonberry thing as part of the grammar errors, it is actually one word, or at least, google says it, so... But anyways, I would be okay with you being my editor, just be warned, I do this writing between the hours of 10 pm and 4 am so pre-edit/proofreading, they are just....just...just.....you can guess. Anyways, thanks as always for your comment.

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