• Member Since 7th May, 2014
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Hoodwinked MCShelster


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It's the dawn of Hearts and Hooves Day. Like every year, Roseluck is just going to run her shop for the poor stallions and colts that forgot to buy their marefriends a gift, all by herself since her friends even had dates. Maybe after that'd she'd watch some movies by herself like every year. However, unknown to her, plans have changed for this Hearts and Hooves day...

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this is so cute :pinkiecrazy:

It's cute, but you might want to just give it a quick once-over to check for errors. I was pulled out of the story when I couldn't help but notice that "Ponyville" and "Sugarcube Corner" weren't capitalized. Plus I noticed one sentence was missing punctuation at the end, and there's a verb tense error ("wish" when it should be "wished") in the second paragraph.

It's all minor stuff, but fixing it will make your story that much better.

6281028 Thank you, my editor and I must have missed that :twilightblush:

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