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I got the idea for this in a dream, weird huh?
If you want to do a reading of this story please contact me at:
cadwyn@mossholder.com
Also, If you have any question about the story, please PM me your question.
So please enjoy my story, When the Sun Sets, I know I will Always be With You.
I know, cheesy title but whatever.
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Its intresting i'm enjoying it so far ill see where this goes
You did good so far, but I'd like to point out that at the beginning it cut into first person:
I used to make the same mistake too. Nothing too bad, though. Good luck with your story!
Thank you all for the positive responses! The next chapter will be posted in a few minutes hopefully, I have high hopes for this story!
6275493 Thank you for pointing that out, it should be fixed now.
The second chapter is posted! Please tell me what you think! Also, leave a like if you are enjoying the story so far.
A few spelling errorsbut pretty good I like it
Nice to see more Sunset/OC shipping's, my own fic of that's been in the planning stages since about....November.
I noticed a few grammatical errors, which you should probably look over, maybe ask an editor for help there.
Also, another slight problem I noticed right off the bat, you used an entire paragraph to describe both Sunset and Dara, I would probably suggest cutting that out, paragraph descriptions are a little boring for some readers, and in the case of an original character it can make them seem a little sue/stuish...
Interesting enough concept so far for me to give you a follow, I hope you don't mind my feedback, just looking to help a fellow author!
Good so far. Likin' how Dara isn't super suave and gets Sunset a ladyboner everytime she speaks. Most of these fics are dumb like that. Now, in order so that when certain people show up and eat you alive for the few mistakes you've made while writing, I'm gonna help by pointing them out.
You should never write cuz. This just sets reviewers off REALLY badly. Always write 'cause or because. It's for your own good. Trust me.
Lookin' forward to the new chapter. 
Things are coming along.
Although I do firmly recommend paying a bit more attention to your grammar, so you don't get eaten alive by critics. 
This is a great story keep it up
At least we know you were still writing it just seems you kinda rushed this chapter a little I kinda got confused when they were playing the game other than that it was good cant wait to read more
Yey! New chaptah!
6275532 y did you cancel the story? It was getting good?
6653049 it's canceled for now, I've changed my mind. Its going to be formatted differently. I'm going to change to hatius.
6653507 yay! Thats great I always wanted to write a sunset shimmerx oc but im to lazy xd