• Member Since 20th Jul, 2015
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giantpepsi44


New writer looking for constructive critism about my writing

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One night, during a freak storm, a dark stallion wonders out of the evergreen forest and collapses outside Fluttershy's cottage. But after being treated in the infirmary, he is found to have no memory or any recollection of his past life. What no pony knew was that a monstrous army was forming with a goal of destroying all creatures of chaos, along with ending the Alicorns rule and inslaving the populace of equestria. Can the lives of all ponies rely on the beasts they once aimed to destroy and warriors long thought to be myths?

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 5 )

Spellcheck can be your friend if you let it. A lot of web browsers include it automatically these days.

(Hint: "guardian". Hint: "prologue".)

Comment posted by giantpepsi44 deleted Aug 15th, 2015

Hey guys, sorry I haven't been updating, I have been realllllyyy busy this week. But expect more uploads coming and thank you to everyone who has liked and followed this story so far :pinkiehappy:

nice story so far i will keep a eye on it don't disapoint me:scootangel:

6354339 Thanks. I am going to be uploading more frequently from now on, I had a busy couple of weeks so it was difficult to. Thanks for the comment anyway :pinkiehappy:

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