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MrAlterad


A brony living in the states that really likes Fallout.

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While looking through a big book of spells, Trixie finds one she's never tried before. One that'll let her get even closer to her friends!
Can anything go wrong? Oh sweet Luna! Yes, yes it can!


Set in the Trio-verse, an AU where Celestia was banished, and Luna took up Sunset, Trixie and Twilight as her students. Recommend reading Luna's Protégé and The Fillies of Canterlot Castle before this one.

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This was indeed a funny one shot story. Hmm normally it's Twilight whom screws up spells. :raritywink:

I love Trixie's playfulness.

Wait, I just realized; did Luna interfere with the spell to teach them a lesson?

6204967 Things get especially problematic when Sunset screws up a spell. :derpyderp1:
6205288 A happy Trixie is the best Trixie! :trixieshiftleft::twilightsheepish:

You should make a sequel to this.
Say the page for the spell is ruined so they have to order another book trouble is will take a three days to arrive.
see how they react and adapt for the next few days.

6205320 I have absolutely no idea what you're referring to! :derpytongue2:

Trixie must have learned from Twilight on how to screw up spells. :twilightblush:

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That was amazing I enjoyed it I wish Sunset Shimmer would come back to Equestria maybe she will in the next movie and ARE WE EVER GOING TO SEE MORE TRIXIE!!! We havent seen her since rainbow rocks and a few episodes in mlp

The good thing about reading little side stories such as these is that I can now read the main story that I've missed out on!

Of course Trixie would screw that up...Great one shot!

Good one-shot. As I expected it, Trixie is talking of herself at the third person. ^^ I really love when writters respect that. It makes a good point for you. And I found it funny. Nothing bad to say about your story. :twilightsmile: Keep going like this!


,Peace from Midnight.

I was going to nitpick about some of the grammar and spelling, but I was too busy nodding my head and laughing inwardly
Nice work

This is funny ¡Trixie and her theatrical smoke! In reality, they would want to switch bodies with stallions or a different kind of pony such as Earthen or Pegasus. ¡Screw reality, this is funny just the way it is!

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In reality, they would want to switch bodies with stallions or a different kind of pony such as Earthen or Pegasus.

Trixie, definitely. :trixieshiftleft:
Twilight, she'd need some serious persuasion after what just happened. :twilightoops:

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Luna: "Can't a princess run a kingdom without her star pupils messing up a spell!?"
Sunset: "To be fair, I had no part in this."
Trixie: "Oh, thanks Sunset, you're a real pal!"
Sunset: "You're welcome." *smileyface*

And the worst part is, until Luna fesses up, they don't even know with 100% certainty they just got pranked by best princess.

6252943 Truly, some mysteries are never solved... :trollluna:

“Nopony's fooling around!” Trixie shouted as her horn glowed, “We just wanted to know what each others' bodies felt like!”

Just for a moment, I made the mistake of wondering how the joined rear-halves were breathing... :twilightoops:

Luna totally trolled the hay out of Trixie and Twilight, didn't she.
At least she's somewhat more subtle about it than :trollestia:

Snrk, that made me laugh, a lot.

That. Was beautiful!:pinkiesmile:

I love that even when they're older, they're still adorable, but in a different way.

I'm going to guess that the spell went awry because of Twilight's magic having that affinity for chaos interacting with Trixie's magic and her ability just to let her magic do the work.

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