A man on earth meets Princess Luna. He ignores Luna's attempts at companionship, and by consequence gets teleport to equestria. things kind of go downhill from there.
He dies, also.
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Kezraux
Romans 2:1 Therefore you have no excuse, O man, every one of you who judges. For in passing judgment on another you condemn yourself, because you, the judge, practice the very same things.
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I have commented on my story.
this is a comment
a comment has just happened.
It's got really short chapters, but what I read elicited a few chuckles. It's a nice experimental piece, too - though that last chapter was way out of left field. Complete change in tone.
Anyway. Have a like.
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I don't know if serious or just stupid.
If only you just kept this at [Dark] [Comedy] [Random] level, this would have been a little more coherent. I think people were more pissed that it was incorrectly tagged and the last chapter than anything. Oh well, good luck for your next story, you seem to have the ability, but need more work in execution.
Hmmm.., not quite sure what I read. Thumbs up anyways
This is tagged Tragedy and everyone else got hurt. Therefore, Tharaal and Khlateel are villains.
ps: one of differences between tragedy and non-tragedy is that in non-tragedy, the suffering one is the villain.
Some moderator really needs a slap for letting this through
I read the whole thing, and tell you the truth it wasn't that bad. Very experimental. I like that.
Have an upvote.
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Fixed.
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They say a picture is worth a thousand words. Well:
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Tags are fixed. I hope now that you may look up to the tags like you would your childhood role model, with your heart full of awe, love and ambition all at once.
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so short ..but so funny
What we know about Derek: He's no p***y @$$ b****. He doesn't want to spend time with Luna.
What we know about Derek's sneakers: They weren't brand name, and they were an ugly shade of greenish-blue. But they worked just fine. The bottom of the shoes had a ridged, rubbery pattern that did well to grip the sidewalk, unless it was icy.
Another nice feature of these shoes were the laces themselves. They were soft, flexible and colored a bright, neon red. Derek likes them and puts them on his bed.
If it's not important to the story, I don't give a flying feather what his sneakers look like. Derek, on the other hand, is supposed to be the main character of the story we don't know how old he is, we don't now who he lives with, we don't know what he looks like, he doesn't have any backstory.
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I'm sorry my story was not to your liking. I'll make sure, first thing in the morning, to crawl out of my bed in the basement and tell my mother what you thought. Perhaps she may give me writing advice.
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I chuckled heartily.
The intricacies of horse dicks
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Glorious, glorious.
Thank you for reading my story, friend.
6228554 I fucking love this!
6230279 I'm glad you do.
you should check out my other shit sometime.
6208787 y u do dis?
6230288 mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmk
6208787 Sounds like he's offering valid points, though I haven't actually read the fic. Maybe you should at least consider what he's trying to tell you, author.
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My suspension of disbelief can only go so far.
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Shh it's true i swear
Couldn't have said it better myself.
Wow! This story is really good so far!
Definitely not the author; just wanted to say, this is a great read. I'm on the metro right now laughing my ass off, and everyone else is staring at me! Hah! I think I'll share this with my kids once I get off the old 9/5...
Hah! Good job!
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thank u