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5thWriter
I'm a 28 year old Texas brony, who enjoys meeting new people here on Fimfiction.
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Dun dun duuuunnnnn.
Hmm, not bad, but this probably would had been better if it was paired with the story that came before it. Most of it was simply exposition. Unless there is more that we don't know about.
6194820
Yeah, nothing quite like being caught by family members while having sex.
6195055
You're right, it would have been better if it was paired with the other story. The reason its own story is because I wasn't able to get this finished before the contest deadline.
6195081 Eeyup. Oh, and I'm working on the sequel for my fic.
6195081 Well, you could had still put it in with the other story. I mean, MarikAzemus isn't technically done with 'Hot Bruises'. You only needed the chapter with the sex and stuff in it.
It's just that this story doesn't have much to offer on it's own. And the sex scene between Doctor and Derpy was very rushed.
6195097
All right, good luck and I hope it goes well. This story wasn't so much a sequel as it is a continuation.
6195120 This sequel involves Macareina giving a punishment to Rainbow Blitz.
Equestria allows ponies to get married at 13? WTF?
6195961
I needed an age for Derpy and Dr. Hooves to be married to each other and still have Dinky at an appropriate age. Besides, people have gotten married younger than that. It was close to the start of the 20th century with the industrial revolution that a minimum marriage age was raised. My mother's great-aunt (my great-great-aunt) was married at the age of 11.
“So, how long until anypony realizes it isn’t Macintosh and Pinkie, [put] us?”
Typo. I believe "but" is meant to be here.
I feel like, rather than its own story, this should have been a bonus chapter added to the other one after it was judged for the contest.
Still pretty good, quite funny. Not as much opportunity for sexy, but still good.
6351536
I admit that this was suppose to be part of the story, but I was running out of time; so I decided to divide it into two separate parts. The first story is really more for the sexy and perviness. While this story, tones the perviness down and ups the comedy a little.
6351859
I'd like to see a story about this universe's Doctor and Derpy.
6351872
I'm planning to expand on this universe with both Pinkie/Mac & Derpy/Doctor.
6354611
Sweet.
Story driven, or more clop?
Please say both.
6354621
A mixture of both. Unlike many of my fellow bronies, I know that clop (sex) is actually a part of life. So, it can be thought of more as a progress of life driven story with sprinkles of clop here and there.
6354633
That's going to be fun.
6354653
Thanks.
However, I just started back at classes so I'm going to be slow in my writings; and I have got a lot of stories back logged at the moment.