New chap of Our Town here. Time is getting tight though so next update probably won't be on time :( but we'll see. Hope people enjoy it :)

nice chapter, I really think your formatting has greatly improved and I can definetly see your growth as a writer. Can't wait for the next chapter, but I'll sit here and be patient.

Starlight did seem to have a greater connection with Double Diamond. I could see her have shades of this—a kink of seeing mares be dominated by stallions, perhaps even living the scenario vicariously. She can't ever let her guard down and let herself be dominated, after all. So, maybe she took to turning every other mare of the village into a submissive to get her rocks off.

Well, if this is normal in her village, I'd like to see some more hints of how exactly this manifests among those already indoctrinated. There should be mares sucking off stallions in dark corners around the town then, after all.

Rip this fic?

6659226 It's been only two months. Give the author some time. It's the holiday season so they probably have family stuff and school business to deal with.

just to let people know that tfic is not dead and have material for it but am being verrry slow with it :(

still not dead :p and might have a bit of time to get the ideas I have on paper onto Fim :P didn't expect it to take until the start of the next season of pony to resume :P

7006973 I'm still hoping for the next chapter

Would like to see more =o

Really wishing for this story to continue!! :(

update?