Long ago in the magical kingdom of Equestria, the land was ruled by an Alicorn princess. Though she may be a fair ruler, many have forgotten the origin of such a pony. A being of the three tribes seemed hard to imagine when the land was first founded, but for a pony named Twilight, she'll learn first hoof at how this Alicorn came to be.
Story starts within Season 5 and follows in first person pony.
Yes, this is a 'Legend of Zelda' crossover, however you don't need to know anything about the franchise in order to find enjoyment from this story. The Zelda features are basically used to help push the story along (with references, elements, and ponies playing the parts of the game characters (with a few exceptions)).
Those that have read 'The Journal of the Two Sisters: The Official Chronicles of Princesses Celestia and Luna,' please disband any thoughts of that story when reading this.
What does this have to do with Zelda?
Also, there's a lot of tense switches. While it's in first-person, so they're not particularly noticeable, they're still rather annoying.
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Nothing much so far. What I'm trying to make is a fusion between the two franchises that holds many elements that Zelda fans might catch, but still try to make it seem like it would fit in the MLP series. A few of these elements will include dungeon crawling, familiar bosses/tools found in the series, and ponies resembling Hylians, Gorons, and Ritos.
beter and beter and it only on ch2 please keep up the alwsome work and I look forward to more storys you mske
Let's where this little adventure takes us....
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I believe you mean "Zoras", unless it's just ment to trigger me, in which case,
Mission successful
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*views word 'Rutos'*
*Looks at keyboard to see the 'u' key is next to the 'i' key.*
.......yes!!! Tha-that was my plan all along.
now it really getting alwsome, cant wait to read more so I look forward to more ch or storys you make.
keep up the alwsome work
Silly commander. You shouldn't look a gift horse in the mouth.
This is one of THE best stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I wish I could like it repeatedly. I will be coming back later to reread it though.
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When you do reread it, keep an eye out for sentences that are directed towards Cici, you'll be delighted to catch the references I made when wording some of them.
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Will do
And, a satisfying story to end the night with, how nice of fimfiction to show me this, and you sir or madam, have written an amazing story
This was deeply enjoyable, I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel to this someday.
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Maybe not a sequel, but I have been thinking of a oneshot prequel that would explain a few things about the ancient civilization and the events leading up to the moment Cici met Twilight.
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That would be cool as well I rather liked the blended world you had crafted for this story and the idea of there maybe being some sort of sequel only came to mind because when I was thinking of Zelda final bosses I was thinking of their tendency to return well barring the nightmare from Link's Awakening.
Clover the Clever?
Saw that one coming.
Beautiful “Sword in the Stone” reference.
Skull kids... don’t get me started.
That troll!!!
Image links in author's note and perhaps other places broken.
Took me a second to decipher this but the chuckle I got when I did was worth it.
Um... Ursa Minor much?
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I'm well aware, but I couldn't find the time or place to find the letters again.
FYI: The images basically spelled out the words 'Good luck' in Hylian.
edit: Got around to create an image of Hylian text.... yeah.
parietal
-I Googled this. Not sure it is the work you want?
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You're right, I was trying to find a scientific name for 'lizard eye' to keep the creature's identity a secret until the last sentence and 'parietal' just kept coming up. I'll go with 'elliptical' instead, thank you for pointing that out.
Amusing, not catapult Twilight, you got in by Party-Canon
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Catapult twilight?
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Fyi, they're called Zoras, Zorans, or Zora, not Rutos.
This is an interesting start! Thanks for recommending this to me.
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I'm aware, but if you notice a comment I replied to in chapter three, I accidentally hit the 'u' key instead of the 'i' key.
I really meant 'Ritos', but was kinda conflicted on fixing the typo or not. It would've made Makkusueru's comment a misconjection because of the missing proof and felt like a jerky move at the time, but now that I'm looking at it from a much older point of view, it seems kinda silly to not fix it.
Happy you enjoy it so far. I wanted to add the 1st and 2nd chapter together because it felt like the end of the 2nd is where the story truly begins, but I felt like this was a good place to stop.
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Oooooh okay that makes a lot more sense! I was really confused for a bit. XD
Ooooh. This only gets better!
Oh! Cici has to be Celestia. I get it now!
Also, I'm really loving this story. It's such a perfect blend of LoZ and MLP! All the pieces are fitting so smoothly together!
Patience.....?
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.......I hate that word. I hate that word so much. It always gets the better of me, just like presents and presence.
Thank you for pointing this out.
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XD you're welcome
These references are killing me!
SHE SAID IT!!! SHE SAID THE THING!!!!!
Just gotta say......this story is a masterpiece.
What's the story on his fear of that particular phrase?
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It was a popular line Ghirahim once said and I wanted to give some hint to the reader of the connection, but I couldn't figure out how.
The line 'This news has just filled my heart with rainbows!' sounds pretty girlish, and as I reflect upon Ghirahim, he kept coming across as being feminine. The makeup, the earring, the poses, the attire. He may act creepy and is just being flamboyant, but he just kept coming off as a drag queen. It also didn't help that he appeared to be hitting on Link at times (which lead me to use this as Star Swirl's 'wake up call' because if a gay guy hit on a straight fella like me, I'd be uncomfortable much like Link appeared to be).
I don't quite recall, but I believe at the time I wrote 'it sounded like something a feminist would say.', I kept thinking 'feminist' is something you call a feminine person. Maybe I could've worded it differently and have 'a feminine pony would say' instead.
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Yeah, I know that, I remember bursting out laughing and falling over when it was said in the game. XD I was just wondering why Star Swirl would freak out about now, but now I get it.
This story was absolutely amazing. I literally..........have no words.
I may sound like I'm just getting overdramatic, but I would not hesitate to call this a masterpiece.
It's an incredible blend of all the games, and I love how you portray Equestria's past with all of the Hyrulean tribes. The dialogue was so enjoyable, the characters were spot on, and the references........okay, I could rave about the references for hours alone. XD The writing was so crisp and clean, and it was just an absolute delight to read.
Maybe I'm biased cause it's LoZ, but I think this is hands down the best fic I have ever read on this site.
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