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Benjamin Carmine


I'm gone...goodbye

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its been long since I was happy...long since I knew what I was fighting....long since I had family....long since I had friends....even longer since I've seen another GDI soldier..for all I know I am the last GDI soldier in the area. Two months ago a Scrin mothership's main gun malfunctioned causing a temporal rift in space and time. When the everyone calmed and settled. We set up a small outpost..two weeks later we spotted NOD three clicks from our base. Small skrimishs epruted only getting larger. That's when it happened it was around 12 at night when they struck. The so called inhabitants of the apparent new planet. They weren't humans, Scrin, or even mutants..but ponies. When they struck they stuck hard. Their Pegasus were too fast they demolished our firehawks even before they could get airborne. Now I'm the only one left. In a prison, my humanity draining from me little by little each day.

COMMAND AND CONQUER BELONGS TO EA
MLP BLEONGS TO HASBRO

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Comments ( 45 )

What? Ponies able to take down good old human engineering and kill off an entire base of people with guns and advanced armor? ..........I shall read this later to determine if its any good

Comment posted by Benjamin Carmine deleted Jun 29th, 2015

6149574

Well NOD was harassing them. So they were weak at the point in time, also I couldn't find a way for them to win without GDI kicking their asses

6149593 fair enough.... But still... Wiping out every GDI soldier and vehicle? And why the hell Did eqestria attack a foreign power with no reason whatsoever?

As long the pony's get nuked for there extreme actions of fagotry douchebaggery and assholery I'm good......

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Think about it if you were ruler of equestria would you want two pretty sketchy looking, unknown armies blowing the hell out of each other and the environment to possible beat the shit out of you or your citizens. And I couldn't find a way to progress the story, but I'll keep in mind that GDI is more advanced and shouldn't be taken down easy. Thanks and I will try in full your request fire will rain from the skies!

6149633 wait what? The only "sketchy" army here is NOD. These guys are essentially like an entire worlds governments put together and told to defend the world. Essentially eqestria just declared war on an entire planet (or at least half of it) in a way.
Please at least make kyle tell them that.... I would like them to realize the mistake they've just made

6149901

yeah I have something special planned for the diplomacy, and since kyle is the only human representative and he is very unstable...well lets say not everyone is coming out without a broken bone or 5.

6149927 all I want is for them to realize the mistake they've made then shit there pants in fear of the GDI and the orbital ion cannon
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"well then lets find out!" he opened my cell door, dropped his weapon and shut the cell door behind him

I can smell the court martial from my bed


Also.... She really doesn't believe him does she? What a dumbass......
I'll love it when the GDI come by asking where the hell they're troops went and Tia is all like "oh I killed them"
That is gonna be priceless reading as she realizes just how badly they fucked up


Oh and what about the gaurd that is STILL knocked out in kyles cell

Right
Good job but I'm sure you could do better
Also there seems to be an unnecessary amount of screaming in this

6160611 I'd be mad certainly..... But I would rather keep calm and be an asshole and generally hinder them calmly..... Slowly let them realize the mistake they've made.... Then when they ask if we can make peace I would tell them that they've basicly fucked themselves....... Unless they decided to be stuck up and think that it all OK when it isnt or if they pretend there in the right then I'll get a little frustrated and maybe raise my voice a little but outright screaming? No definitely not

6162896

I chose all this because when I was developing kyle's personality it suited him. He is at times a outspoken asshole..well you'll see him develop on your own.

Plus this is kyle...not you

6165594 yah i know ...
I was just answering that one guy about what I would do

6208983

Third Tiberium war, just your standard rifle grunt

Why are the highly advanced humans getting chopped down by a bunch of ponies? At least give them more losses.

6221274

Probably gonna re-write that chapter anyhow To make it more reasonable

6154750 pew pew, on a much bigger scale

6224826

Believe me when I re-write it....it's gonna have mammoth tanks and everything...lots more blood and violence

6224833 is it 1:30 in the morning for you too?

as it turns out, this game was my childhood, my parents owned/worked at a game-store/lan center. and once me and my dad played a tournament in it, when I was about eight. we ended up getting third place

it makes me so happy that this game, my nostalgia is being crossed with the universe that I've recently become interested in.

kyle is a bastard

arent we all?

6224862

It's 2:30 and this game WAS my entire childhood I will do my best to make it so it actually combines universes.. And that's really cool I don't do tournaments I play for fun with my friends I felt so much nostalgia when I started making this series....I have posters and even my P.c background is the GDI symbol...i love command and conquer.....red alert not so much honestly

Well this happened


Kyle should totally bitchslap rainbow dash for shits n giggles at some point


Just sayin

6224882 I never actually played red alert, but from what I heard, i didnt miss much

6253036

There was a nod soldier in the picture for a reason....it was all a set up.....it was an inside job

What's the mercenary story gonna be like?

I take it you played C&C red alert 2?

........................ok...................

I feel like you all deserve one last thing...
This is what is happening:
1. I'm not a brony anymore
2. This story will not continue
3. I moved onto Fanfiction.net
4. I'm sorry if any of you enjoyed this and this is the end
5. If anyone wants to pick up where i left off, go ahead, take my characters, but if you do, keep them as them, please as one last request...
6. This is goodbye

:fluttershysad: Oh. That sucks. Good bye then, it was fun of having you around. Good luck on your own fanfic on Fanfiction.net!

Wait what happened that caused this? Also rip.

7196346

I just stopped being a brony, lost intresting and gave up. I now just write on fanfiction.net and this might be the last time anyone heres from me. So this is to you and everyone else with questions. If for some reason you want to check me out my accout is Reinhardt Wilhelm. There will be no mlp or anything. Sorry for letting you all down

7205668

Eh I could care less, just sorry that this story died, well I'm just gonna move on now...

7205676 It's fine. Preferences will change. Have a good one.

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