Everypony has had the hiccups at one point or another in their life. It's usually a non-event. However, when Twilight Sparkle gets the hiccups, things may not go quite so normally.
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I regret posting this. Like, a lot.
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Pretty funny. Reminds me a bit of Toot Your Own Horn.
6142805 Yeah, I was honestly a bit worried I was too close to Toot, but it's a bit of a different take on the idea.
6142890
Different enough, yeah.
Great story
The ending just ties the story together.
That ending, though...
6172907 Yeah, I know it's bad. I still feel bad about publishing this.
6172933
Are you kidding? I enjoyed the hell outta this. You did great! And it wasn't too close to Toot, although a relation can be drawn.
But that ending made it all. I was cackling about it for the past 15 minutes.
Upvote is yours.
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6172933 What? Why? This is awesome!
6268586 I still feel this isn't my best work. Oh well, live and learn. The "learn" part that I learned is that "one must have a story edited before submitting it"
I think Spike's breakfast was actually weirder before the hiccup.