Every brony wants to wake up and find themselves in Equestria, even more so as a pony. But I didn't wish this! Not only am I Flash Fucking Sentry, I'm marrying Chrysalis! What did I ever do to deserve this?!
I like this chapter. it flows really good it has a good story line to it and expands the story really good. I can see you laying ground work for latter in the story and I must say this is a really good job Autum Breeze. I must say flash as a mare was a shock and not ever being able to foal is a shock but for this story I am guessing it is one more hurtle for flash to deal with. Harts Fire
Sorry for not responding to this story sooner, I thought that every body would have better things to say about it then anything that I could think of;twilightblush:. So fare I think that every chapter of this story is great with every chapter and I am looking forward to see more of it. I like involving stories where I have not idea were it going to go only that it's only going to get weirder and more convoluted as it goes on, and I like it when that happens. I really don't see what there is anything wrong with the r63 rule other that the pattern some time becomes predictable the more I read them. But in this case, it is anywhere but predictable especially the wild convoluted revelations that you have show about Flash Sentry personal life story that the bronies don't know anything about, and it makes me wander what els that we don't know about him. I would also point out that every one seem to confuse the Flashs' of both worlds to be the same person/pony and that we shouldn't presume anything about the Equestrian Flash. So far, I have not been disappointed about this story and I am sure that it will get better with every chapter as it already have.
This is the point where you go, yeah, just amputate the womb.
Interesting
I like this chapter. it flows really good it has a good story line to it and expands the story really good.
I can see you laying ground work for latter in the story and I must say this is a really good job Autum Breeze.
I must say flash as a mare was a shock and not ever being able to foal is a shock but for this story I am guessing it is one more hurtle for flash to deal with.
Harts Fire
Sorry for not responding to this story sooner, I thought that every body would have better things to say about it then anything that I could think of;twilightblush:. So fare I think that every chapter of this story is great with every chapter and I am looking forward to see more of it. I like involving stories where I have not idea were it going to go only that it's only going to get weirder and more convoluted as it goes on, and I like it when that happens. I really don't see what there is anything wrong with the r63 rule other that the pattern some time becomes predictable the more I read them. But in this case, it is anywhere but predictable especially the wild convoluted revelations that you have show about Flash Sentry personal life story that the bronies don't know anything about, and it makes me wander what els that we don't know about him. I would also point out that every one seem to confuse the Flashs' of both worlds to be the same person/pony and that we shouldn't presume anything about the Equestrian Flash. So far, I have not been disappointed about this story and I am sure that it will get better with every chapter as it already have.
Definitely curious to see where this is leading. Please continue.
Umm...
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...... You, my devious sir, are an evil genius.
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Hey!
I bet if the changes weren't interrupted by him escaping and Discord's spell, it wouldn't be so bad.
Cya
Raziel-chan
;w; never having foals ;w;