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The Dark Side of Equestria

A brony is teleported into Equestria while it is in the midst of chaos. He must help the gang defeat the cause and save Equestria!

Chapters (4)

Intro · 20th May 2012 · 126 words
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Chapter One · 20th May 2012 · 357 words
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Chapter Three · 27th Jul 2012 · 937 words
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Continue? · 28th Jul 2012 · 69 words
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Foalicon_

Foalicon_ #1 · Jul 28th, 2012 · · · Chapter Three ·

This is just one big ass paragraph

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Foalicon_ #2 · Jul 28th, 2012 · · · Continue? ·

I'm not good with advice.I still don't trust myself on stories.

Sonson-Sensei

Sonson-Sensei #3 · Jul 28th, 2012 · · · Continue? ·

If you only knew the power of the darkside.

zaczac111

zaczac111 #4 · Jul 28th, 2012 · · · Continue? ·

This seems like just three paragraphs to me.. not to mention 'Chapter 4' was actually an author's note.

Sonic Rainbloom

Sonic Rainbloom #5 · Jul 28th, 2012 · · · Continue? ·

Yeah sorry I'm not really good at this kind of stuff. . .I'm not really good at paragraphing and all that or length of chapters due to the fact I just finished a summer reading project and the chapters were super short Plus in writing mode the chapters look way longer. . .Sorry