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Brony_Headbanger


Metal music, guitars, and model electric trains. Rainbow Dash is best pony!

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Eh, with some major editing this could be good....

Omg so amazing why not make a part 2:rainbowkiss:

Love it!! :raritywink:

I demand a SEQUEL!!! :flutterrage:

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I was planning on making a sequel for this story before I started writing it. I'll defiantly make a sequel, but it'll take some time to come up with stuff, LOL. :twilightsmile:

But yeah, me and a friend did enjoy working on it, and after spending hours writing it (no joke :pinkiegasp:) I'll defiantly make a sequel for you guys since that you all enjoyed it so much. Piece.:rainbowkiss:

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Are you talking about his age or...? :applejackunsure:

I'm with Zod and clone. SEQUEL!!!

Well, it's about damn time for a story like this staring my second-favorite MILF. :rainbowkiss:

6123720 Princess Celestia.

No one can ignore that juicy plot.

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Doesn't she had to have a kid to be considered a MILF? The M does stand for mother.

6123770 She had Spike.

Who else took care of that dragon?

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Unless she pooped the egg out her own then that doesn't count.

Her name is usually either Milano or nursery rhyme

Was anyone else expecting to have button or his brother at the end just in the doorway staring out of fear?

the first part was good, i actually would like a real romance/Slice of Life story for Human X Buttons Mom (forgot her fanname), there could be sex if you want, but i am actually interessted in your attempt to make this a bigger story.

are they anthro or ponys? (the Human tag alone is not enough, but i guess they are anthro.

I know this is a clopfic, but it seems to be a bit different at first, that is why it somehow was a bit surprising, that she suddenly started to seduce him, without telling him that she liked him.

That was nice, i would really like a story about them, i can´t decide if this should be the prequel, or if the other story should start a bit different, with actual dates, and stuff like that befor the sex, or if this should just continue as a mature story, but i would not like it if every chapter would be filled with sex, it should be balanced.

will you do this on your reading on YT? while you still can?

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Yeah, sorry for putting the "Human" tag thing on there. I put that on there since that there's like "One" human in Equestria. But thanks for the tip on that man. :twilightsmile:

holy shit that's like a milf lover's dream come true....

The cover art would be sexy, if it didn't look like it was trying repress a shit.

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Love it!! :raritywink:
I demand a SEQUEL!!! :flutterrage:

Look out, author, Mash fics, whether Button or Milano, tend to attract rabbid sequel demands. You'd better get settled in for a seige.

6128632 thank you, i read this right away.
edit: i just notice how short it is, however i still would like to see his own version of a longer story, maybe even with this story as the prequel, but like i said, with well balanced (sex/story),
if there is to much sex, it doesn´t look to good in the story, if it isn´t a clopfic.

Her name is elaina

This fic was weird... the pet names creeped me right the fuck out.

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I was expecing the brother to be there and all the sudden "Coule you keep it down!" or "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?!"

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Cool, thanks for that. I'll put it in the sequel when I work on it. LOL. :twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:

Members?what th- is this what there calling it now . I must be geting old :ajsleepy:






































I say that but I'm 13

6139606 other than that. What teh hell this is creepy its making me ship anon(unnamed character) and buttons mom. I don't want to ship them.

But I do

But I don't

My only real complaint with this story is that the protagonist is utterly clueless, haha. Other than that and some spelling/grammar issues here and there, it's very enjoyable.

Dear god, Anon, you are thick. You're as thick as the big-print version of the complete works of Charles Dickens.

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Whoa, I can't believe I didn't notice that story. :pinkiegasp:

I was looking for a second person story that features Button's mom, and a human Anonymous. But, never found one until you linked this. How did I not noticed that? And I hope I didn't accidentally steal ideas from whoever wrote that story. :fluttercry:

Cause, I really enjoyed writing this.

This was written terribly. The style, the story, the action, just everything was wrong. The adult hanging out with the kid, the weird crying session in the sex scene. Weird.

76 times I have seen some form of the phrase

“You know it’s rude to keep a lady waiting.” “Well, excuse me.” You said to her. “I’m sorry for keeping you waiting.” You said

19 have been oe mature stories.

What could she be doing with all these sex toys anyways?

WHAT A FUCKING MYSTERY

6307887 The world may never know.

6315656 maybe well find out in the sequel?

Loving Care or Nursery Rhyme, that's one of her canon names.

Also, this story isn't too bad...but it was pretty....weird.

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Haha. Yeah, I guess I kinda did without noticing it. Sorry to disturb you if I did man. :twilightblush:

6462617 It's okay. Shit happens XD

I can just imagine how button'd react to anon becoming his sorta step-dad

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I was thinking of the exact same thing man.

6485913 button'd be ecstatic about who his stepdad is

I could see a sequel to this with or without clop about their relationship. From first official date to wedding to first child which could be pony or centaur.

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Eh, true. but, it may be impossible for them to have an actual child though. Since that he's a human, and she's a pony. Could it be impossible or nah? I dunno.

but yeah, I'll make the sequel. I just gotta think of more ideas. i have a few in mind for it, but, it's not enough.

6682057 So your saying that in a world of magical talking pastel colored ponies, that a spell or potion doesn't exist that would allow two individuals of different species that love each other to be able to have a child? There is always a way to work in hybrids. The child could take after it's mother and be a normal pony, it could be an anthro with a precedent being a character named Little AJ from a fan comic called Crazy Future. Finally It could be a centaur like in Greco-Roman mythology. I'm not intending to sound rude or tell you how to write your stories just giving you a few ideas on how they could have a child.

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